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INclan
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0 posted 2001-01-15 10:23 AM



White on black and green
icey embrace of winter
a roaring silence

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JOY 14
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1 posted 2001-01-15 11:17 AM


Good one. "a roaring silence" I like this line.

Joy

wordancer
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2 posted 2001-01-15 12:02 PM


Looks like the 'roaring silence' is a hit, what a great combination.  I love it!

INclan, why don't you post this in the #1 challenge thread, that way all the haiku and responses are kept with the picture.

-wordancer

kaile
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3 posted 2001-01-16 08:37 AM


a roaring silence..made me pause to think whether i had experienced that feeling before...
Gene
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4 posted 2001-01-16 06:13 PM


Sometimes it's in what you don't say as much as what you do say. I liked the irony of the last line too.

~Gene

ellie LeJeune
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5 posted 2001-01-16 08:06 PM


This is so lovely and so full of meaning. Ellie< !signature-->

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.


[This message has been edited by ellie LeJeune (edited 01-16-2001).]

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