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Sunset in San Diego |
Romy Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170Plantation, Florida |
At dusk, obstinate tangerine rays, dash away from the sun like mischievous children, not yet ready to end their play. Weaving around white-gray clouds, streaks of pink and red dangle in the air, swirls of vibrant color in stark contrast against a fading blue-canvas sky. Unable to ignore the persistent tug of the daystar, fiery tails skip one last time over sandy shores and chase one another, to the edge of the horizon, before slipping out of sight beneath evening’s dark blanket. The last golden bits of light, the remains of the day, lay scattered, like abandoned toys across the surface of the friendly sea. With one powerful wave goodbye, they are tossed high into the heavens, lonely beacons, glowing throughout the long night. The distant flickers, serve as a reminder, a cry to the mother-sun, to rise up in the morning and reclaim them as her own. |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Debbie; Wow! This incredibly beautiful poem was so wondrously descriptive and so alive, that I could visualize it clearly. beautiful! A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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Gene Senior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 935Colorado, USA |
Debbie, You paint a lovely sunset. I've been to San Diego and I can see it now. Thanks, I needed that. It's very cold where I am. --- Gene |
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bestgirl911 Senior Member
since 2000-10-04
Posts 551Clio, MI , United We Stand |
Debbie.... I can close my eyes and picture it. I've never been to San Diego, But by the sounds it would be beautiful. Ranea [This message has been edited by bestgirl911 (edited 01-12-2001).] |
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Romy Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170Plantation, Florida |
Ellie, Thanks for the great words of support! I wanted so much to try and describe this sunset in a way that I could share it with others! Gene, I'm glad that I could send some warmth in your direction! Ranea, Yes, San Diego is beautiful, Palm trees,a warm breeze and playful sunsets on the beach... |
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Wikket Member
since 2000-01-29
Posts 340Santa Clara, CA USA |
Exquisite!!! You have reminded me of my childhood!! I grew up in San Diego, graduated from Ramona High as a matter of fact. Thanks for the memories!!! ~~Jamie I mean the opposite of what I say. You've got it now? No, it's the other way. ~Bruce Bennett |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
Debbie, how sweetly you have written about the mother Sun and her willful children! I was very taken by that comparison. And how lovely, to think of the stars as calling her back to claim them! Beautifully written! To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
Mmm. I'm there. Beautifuly written, Debbie. I love sunsets and poems about them. They lift my soul. Joy |
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