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bestgirl911 Senior Member
since 2000-10-04
Posts 551Clio, MI , United We Stand |
A kind word, A loving touch, A whispered joke, Hugs and such, A frightened child, A friend in need, A gentle kiss, A quiet plea. They leave footprints, On our hearts, They touch our lives, They leave their mark. A wistful sigh, A deep regret, A gentle hand, We don't forget. A child's game, A story told, Etched in stone, From days of old. They leave footprints, On our hearts, They touch our lives, They leave their mark. A firm push, A warm embrace, Room to breathe, When you need space. A heartfelt note, A friendship poem, A call to say, "You're not alone." They leave footprints, On our hearts, They touch our lives, They leave their mark. When I read Alicia's "Piece Couple" it made me think of how so many people affect our lives and don't even know it, just by one kind word or action. So this is for Alicia and all the people who have left footprints on my heart. Best [This message has been edited by bestgirl911 (edited 01-10-2001).] |
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Suzanne Arlene Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 377Ontario, Canada |
Oh that was a gem of a poem.Just a gem So very true . Well done best you captured it all  Suzanne |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Beautiful! If we would only be more aware of this most precious truth! Ellie Belief is a truth held in the mind; faith is a fire in the heart. Joseph Fort Newton |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
Oh, this is so beautiful Best! Yeah.. I can think of so many people who have left footprints on my heart.. so many ppl HERE who have.. ^_^ I love this.. so perfectly said.. Love, Lynne |
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Wikket Member
since 2000-01-29
Posts 340Santa Clara, CA USA |
This is great! Flowing so well all the way to the end...like it is natural! I like it very much! MORE MORE!!!   ~~Jamie  I mean the opposite of what I say. You've got it now? No, it's the other way. ~Bruce Bennett |
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bestgirl911 Senior Member
since 2000-10-04
Posts 551Clio, MI , United We Stand |
Suzanne..... Thank you so much..I just don't think people realize how much we affect each others lives. Like the wonderful responses I received for this. Ellie... You hit it right on the mark...if only people would realize how those kind words and actions affect lives. Thank you. Lynne... And you never forget them do you? You always remember those kind smiles when your having a bad day or a friend asking if your okay, and then listening when you say "not really". Thank you for the wonderful response. Wikket.... You always have wonderful things to say about my poems...I appreciate that so much, and I am so glad you enjoy them.... Best |
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blackhalo Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467Denver, CO |
Thanks so much, best. This puts everything I've ever written to shame. It is truly amazing. *in tears* simply beautiful. "Hope is no stronger than the tremulous beads of dew strung on the filament of spiderweb, and it alone can't long support the terrible weight of an an |
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bestgirl911 Senior Member
since 2000-10-04
Posts 551Clio, MI , United We Stand |
Alicia.... You write beautifully that was the point...I liked your poem so much that all this came from the thoughts that yours invoked. Thank you~I'm so glad you like it. Best [This message has been edited by bestgirl911 (edited 01-11-2001).] |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
It's late, and I didn't know if I wanted to open this, but I'm glad I did. These are wonderful thoughts, and I like musical the way you put them together. Think I'll keep this one in my library. To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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Solstice Son Member
since 2000-09-19
Posts 469 |
* smiles from ear to ear* Hmmmmmmm...a little calligraphy...a little matting....some cute inked baby feetprints....and you're the next rage at all the craft fairs hun.... kudos to you Sol |
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bestgirl911 Senior Member
since 2000-10-04
Posts 551Clio, MI , United We Stand |
Marilyn... Thank you so much, I'm glad you did too!... I always appreciate your kind comments. Sol.... Thank you hun....so sweet. Ranea |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Best, i enjoyed reading this...and it reinforces our will to make a difference in someone else's life, yup? btw, good luck on your tanka..will be waiting |
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Dawn Eclipse Senior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 637The Horsehead Nebula |
Wow. this is one of the best poems i've read in a long time! I enjoyed it a lot.. wonderfully written! "Forget regret, or life is yours to miss. No other course, no other way... No day but today" ~Broadway Musical RENT~ *Cassandra Roseen* |
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