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Swamp¤Faeryie
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fairyland....of course;)

0 posted 2001-01-10 02:49 PM


Wrote this one a long time ago,i think it's a bit worn out,but i'll post it anyhow =] It's for a good friend of mine who loves the ocean and who has shared a few peacful thoughts with me that came from the sea  


She leans against the railing of the boat
to be closer to her indigo
She watches the arms of the ocean
reacing out to her
Welcoming into their depths the maiden figure
the waves calling for her to follow them down
to the bottom of the sea
Sea foam feathers whispering on the blue
their whispers reach her ears
They beckon her hand to reach into them
into the core of the seven seas
They are her sirens
they will embrace her deep aqua thoughts
They will surround her body and she is no more
The waters will not turn their backs to her.

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"All art is an expression of pain."~John Lennon

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Suzanne Arlene
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since 2000-10-09
Posts 377
Ontario, Canada
1 posted 2001-01-10 06:05 PM


oh i do so love the call of the sea.Good one  miss fairy     Suzanne
Dopey Dope
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2 posted 2001-01-11 01:29 PM


Wonderful poem! The title is great, very original. The sea will never turn her back on a true lover of it.



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

allan
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since 2000-04-09
Posts 620
On the road
3 posted 2001-01-11 02:19 PM


Lovely poem Swampy, you caught the feeling well...

I especially liked the line...

Sea foam feathers whispering on the blue


Swamp¤Faeryie
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Posts 393
fairyland....of course;)
4 posted 2001-01-13 10:05 PM


thanks ya'll =] i appreciate your coments =]

sammi


"All art is an expression of pain."~John Lennon

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