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pegasus111
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0 posted 2001-01-09 03:49 PM


you are welcome to pick up the pen and enter the contest( if you dare )..lolol


The Pegasus streaks across the sky,
the thunder of the Gods reverberate
to the flash of his mighty wings,
his flight is answered by the echo
of the Wordancer, the eleventh Muse,
keeper of his deepest dreams, guardian
of all poets, champion of the written word.

Pegasus drops the gauntlet in the center
of the fiery ring of rhetoric, withdraws
a long, slim red feather, splits the quill,
dips it in the golden ink, and waits,
for the reply he knows will come on the wind,
with the roar of the countless poet ghosts,
that have roamed the earth since the beginning of time.

Who will accept the challenge?




the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost


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pegasus111
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1 posted 2001-01-09 06:13 PM


" For whom does the bell toll?...It tolls for thee".....lol

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost


wordancer
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2 posted 2001-01-09 07:12 PM


Since the beginning of time,
the dancer of the words
has tripped a light fantastic
alone in the spinning cosmos.
To step on stones—the Milky Way;
solemn moontides, stars that glow,
reflected in amazement for her eyes,
that flash through the sky, so long ago.

Sun flame halos, circles ivory perfection;
black velvet draped in shining rhyme
lightly trips down the golden rail
to heed the silver-streaked summons
that echoes from an enchanted land.
In bewildered wonderment, peering through
crystallized heart-sighs in canyons deep,
in an endless dark-time, shattered shards,
the Lady of the incandescent words
reaches out to lightly touch
the all-consuming rapturous call;
as she steps through the ring glow,
of desire--the winged wonder’s aching hope.

“I am here, the one you seek.”



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ellie LeJeune
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3 posted 2001-01-09 08:06 PM


Beneath the Winged Ones
flight of Fantasy,
lies the Golden Glen.
Deep in fauna
and floral mystic
lights,
shine forth
in myriad magics
mystery.
For here the Fairy Queen
frolics
in everlasting Spring.
Fairies fly on gassamer
wing,
aglow with dust
of magic's golden
charms.
Wordancer waves
her magic wand
of golden Poetic
wonder.
Words float through
the songs
of fairy charms
as they dance
the dance
of magic delights
in this Golden Glen
of Fairies Fantasy.

pegasus111
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4 posted 2001-01-09 08:27 PM


Pegasus smiles a knowing smile..the reply of the 11th muse, daughter of Zeus, was swift, as expected... With a great leap, the white stallion rises like a rocket to the edge of space, white mane streaming, red wings beating powerfully, nostrils flared, eyes burning with an unfathomable determination,
then descends in a blur, plummeting like a comet to the circle of challenge, exploding the words in a shower of flame...

In the forest of doom, the wizard, Fate, has captured the queen of the Fairies, and desires to obtain the secret of her ample power..it is the duty of all who accept the challenge to continue the story to it's conclusion, whenever and however that may be determined..each succeeding reply must take up the story from the last reply and add to it so that it flows smoothly into one grand epic tale..

Fate has cast an evil spell which protects the forest of doom from those who seek to rescue the queen..the "Wraiths from the Underworld" roam the forest and devour all who enter. Only the "Emerald Jewel" can offer a shield from the wraiths...the jewel is embedded in the horns of the Great Ram, who guards his flock in the Valley of Peace, on the far side of the Swamp of the Dragon, which is the only entrance to the valley...

who shall be first?   hahahaha.....
ahhh. dear Ellie.. thou art indeed a psychic wonder...above is my answer and my challenge...

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the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost



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wordancer
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5 posted 2001-01-09 08:47 PM


in this golden glen
a fairies’ fantasy
wisp-poor-wills
call the gloaming
shade of night
passes thru
trilling brooks
the willow weeps
running still
a finger traces tears
that patiently falls from
the satyr's blinded eye
to wrathfully scorn
the old khayyam’s offer
of ripen grapes
a lady waits
in dreamless sleep
her muse
stolen by the dark one
called fate
while dryads gossip
high in the oaks above
to keep vigil
for the scarlet wings that thunder
a night star’s riotous song
clear melody expands
over the enchanted lands

hush!

the  mourning dove calls
as the world awaits the flash
of emerald light
on the horizon of endless time

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"Come...dance with me, into my world of words."




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ellie LeJeune
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6 posted 2001-01-10 02:40 AM


As true to darkness of ever present wraiths
that hover over valley dark with curse,
the gloom of stolen magic from Fairy Queen
is felt in glen and stream.
Pegasus glides on scarlet wing spread wide
to capture emerald's healing power.
For tis the only power that demons
so doth fear and flee the magic given.
Winged One seizes Fairy Queen,
but alas more curses abound,
for stolen still her mystic charms.
Her song that sings as brightest morn,
is now mere muteness in this dark hour.
The phoenix of Morfius mountain cave
has now his own dark song to sing,
that once a Fairy's brightness was.
The azure lake of Fairies glen,
lies deep and cold, frozen as is all
without her song to light this once
a valley bright with Fairy melody.
Somewhere hidden deep in azure lake,
is golden Fairies harp so fair
guarded by the mentors madness.
Only fate and mystic hour or muses
bravest mythic creatures cunning
can once more hear Fairy Queen
sing her song of light and spring
tis he whose deed can find the harp
and play it's golden string
and break this darkest spell.



Shalmond
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7 posted 2001-01-10 11:26 AM


I, Shalmond
Champion diver of the Agean seas,
Defender of the Octallyus Gem
of the Seventh Island,
Shall rescue the fayire harp
from the depths of the azure lake.
And I, Shalmond,
Shall return the Fayire Queens
Melodic gift of Song.
The Amulet of the Sons of Tritian,
Shall guide and protect mine Quest!

Raw evil encroacheth this air,
Yet will I assult its' Domminion!

May the Gods shine forth
their Providence!

To the Quest!

~Shalmond~




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wordancer
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8 posted 2001-01-10 12:15 PM


Ellie, Peg and I are so pleased that you have joined us on our adventure.

Shalmond welcome!  To The Corner Pub and our little fantasy.

Note:  All are welcome to join in.

This is going to be such a grand adventure and perhaps at times, a bit confusing….but, it’s all good fun.  

1. Do generally follow the story guidelines, set forth by Pegasus, on the major story points.

2. Side trips, surprises and adventures are allowed to be worked in to the storyline.

3. Do read previous posts as a guide to where we are at, and picked up story with the last post.

4. The crazy part will be, if someone posts their continuation while you are writing yours.  DOUBLE CHECK to be sure this didn’t happen to you.  You might have to revise your addition a bit,  before you can post.

5. Write in a poetic form that suits you and/or style of the adventure, try something new.

Most of all, lets enjoy ourselves!  Anything else, Peg?

-wordancer


pegasus111
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9 posted 2001-01-10 02:35 PM


the master of words has spoken..so it shall be written..so it shall be done...

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost


wordancer
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10 posted 2001-01-11 09:49 AM


A die is cast
A thread is drawn
The fickle hand of fate
Has written is the sands of time
“What is now, now is so.”

A plot thickens
A story grows
The villain named fate
Brought together the
Entanglement of the four
(Does he know what he hath wrought)
As they all seek to save the fairy queen
From her long and voiceless dream
Little do they know
this is also their story that is being told
As they enter this turn of the world
On this preordained quest.

The Pegasus, a red-winged wonder
Can only look asunder
Not knowing why he was called
From his all-encompassing search
To find the piece of his soul
That will make him whole.

Wordancer,
the dancer of the words
The one who creates worlds
From words of nothing
The one who solves all problems
But knows not, what she seeks is something

Ellie, the winsome elf
Born of two worlds
Too tall for the elfven world
Too short for the human world
A wanderer looking for her life.

Shalmond, the last quarter of the whole
A champion all so bold.
Tall and proud.
Vocal and loud.
He thinks that he seeks
A grand adventure only.


Thus and so
Around the campfire that glows
A tale will be told
Heroes made
Villains named
New friendships found
Oaths made and bound
Journeys stated in the dark
Destinies marked

. . .and so the adventure starts



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Shalmond
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11 posted 2001-01-11 12:10 PM


Sea of night, thy surface quiver,
Strength of mind to me deliver
As I embark on purposed quest,
May my journey thus be blest.

Dark the waters, sullen, cold,
Part thy treasure, naught withhold,
Tritian, Father of the deep,
Guide me safe, from danger keep.

Waters in thy foam I dive,
In thy depths the prize I strive,
Claim not my spirit, as I descend,
A valiant foe you'll find my friend.


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ellie LeJeune
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12 posted 2001-01-11 01:17 PM


With bated breath,this Elf doth wait,
as Shalmond dives beneath the dark
and deepest dredge of watery grave.
She feels a power, not known before.
Sight that's beyond that which is seen,
she sees that Shalmond has been seized
by watery demons grasp of deathly grip.
Without thought her powers surge,
and send forth a fire of lightening.
The flames burn high in deepest lake.
the demon snared in circle of light.
A fiery rope insnares his wrath.
Shalmond seizes magic harp at last.
Will this restore the Fairy Queen,
her mystic voice to be heard again?


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Shalmond
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13 posted 2001-01-12 02:06 PM


As the deep envelopes myne frame,
Darkly whispers theaten goal,
Myne treasured amulet from my neck thrust,
Surrounded was I by countless foe.

Unsheathed myne blade, ready, wait,
For the onslaught of certian death,
Demon eyes in murky depths,
Chanced to seize myne last full breath.

Grasp in unearthly hands of hell,
My strength in struggle, sudden fade
Aburst of LIGHT!, these demons ebb,
My stength renewed, to harp I made.

Saved by the light, these demons hate,
It burns their eyes in unholy stare,
With harp at side, amulet in hand
Head for the surface, and sweet night air.

Dragging myself upon the shore,
An elfin figure aproaches near,
But down swooped a dragon and stole the harp,
And flew off with the treasure dear.

My Elfin friend, I've failed the queen,
The fayrie world in silence moan,
For to lose this harp of joy,
Myne greiving spirit thus doth groan.  


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pegasus111
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14 posted 2001-01-12 05:46 PM


In darkest hour of Ellie and Shalmond,
Pegasus descends from out of the sun,
the lady Wordancer upon his back,
and settles in their midst, transformed,
into his second form of man,
fear not, my friends, for all is not lost,
we must seek the Swamp of the Dragon,
and retrieve the magic harp.

The way is dangerous but, we must hurry,
for the Ram and his flock soon move to
winter quarters, beyond our reach till spring.
We must secure the Emerald Jewel and the harp
in order to defeat the Wizard and rescue the
Fairy Queen.

The Lady Wordancer has a plan to trap
the dragon and reclaim the harp.
Listen well. You must secure wax to
put in your ears when she sings the
siren song to lure the dragon into
the quicksand of the swamp. Shalmond
may then dive deep into the dragon lair
and snatch our prize.

Reverting to his winged form, Pegasus waits
for all to climb aboard his back.
Springing into the air, he flies swiftly
toward the dreaded Swamp of the Dragon,
and the next step in the adventure.

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost


wordancer
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15 posted 2001-01-16 05:47 AM


Upon the Pegasus’ back,
the new adventurers soar
to encircle the land of the flaming sun
as he lets loose a loud challenging roar

The wee winsome elf, Ellie
and the bold diver of the Agean seas
are in deep conversation about
how her surprising powers came to be.
And the mighty Shalmond and his archaic speech,
which is very close to elfin talk,
has completely charmed the fair little one,
Who is too short for the human world.
Who is too tall for the elfin world.
So she stands alone in-between.

Now is the time, the dancer realized,
to confess that she is not what she seems be.
O mighty red-winged wonder of the sky,
listen to me, before to the Swampland we fairly go.
You must know that the Siren Song of mine,
can only shine forth in wondrous tune,
with my magical instrument
brought from a land afar,
a plain old wooden guitar that croons.
She whispers into the Pegasus’ twitching ear
with a hot blushing face,
I left it the in the Village of Rowland-by-the-Sea.

Well now, this causes quite a stir,
as all who knows anything at all,
know that the Village of Rowland-by-the Sea
is only gained admittance by manly warriors, who be.

The Pegasus turns his ivory column neck
and quirks an inquiring eyebrow.
Lady! How can this be, you a Warrior?
Tell me thus and so, how can this be.
This true, the Lady relates:
As when I stepped between the gates,
when I was called here on this mission,
that in my land, you must understand,
ladies there, are allowed to defend their land.
To wit and proven, thus and so.
As this is why I was allow to be
a member of Rowland-by-the-Sea.

With a snort and a gusty sigh
the Pegasus turns a 360 and then a half again
to ride back with hard-stroking wings,
sailing the shining stars
to fetch the Lady’s old wooden guitar that croons.
Harump! he grumps.
Why do I feel that something else
is amiss with this intriguing miss.

O sire, you are right, that there is more,
before we can go on with this awesome chore.
I must go back to my turn of the world.
You see, my bag of words….well,
you see it is almost empty.
In my mundane land there is a machine
that I use to make my words that sing.
An fey enchanted box call a ‘puter,
from which I must download my words
onto little black disks that I carry in my pouch
so carefully tied at my waist.
I have been here so long
that is almost empty;
and we can not charge the Dragon Swamp
until we go back to my Connect-I-Cut land
to retrieve some more.
But fortunately the hidden door
to this strange land
is on the way to Rowland-by-the Sea.



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Shalmond
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16 posted 2001-01-16 09:09 PM


Thy powers thus saved my life,
Freed me from the demon strife,
Thy light like radiant heaven shone,
To save me from a fate unknown.

The evil there could not withstand,
Thy lighted flash from forth thy hand,
In darkness work they, their evil deeds,
Shun the light , from which they flee.

Ellie, I thus bow to thy power,
That saved me in this self-same hour,
Thy magic strong ye manifest,
The enemy defeated, will confess!

How mighty soar we on scarlet wing,
The world so different this view bring,
Wordancer in our host ear whispers,
As we soar by the twinkling vespers.

We turn with mighty strength and ease,
Elfin friend , do hold on please,
Wordancer hath a funny smirk,
Made for Pegasus, some more work!
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Not all who wander are lost. J.R.R.Tolkien

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pegasus111
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17 posted 2001-01-16 09:22 PM


Guide us, Wordancer, to this mysterious place
and fetch thy disks, for we need thy song,
to mesmerize the dragon, and gain the harp.
We are ready to assist thee in thy quest. Lead on, master of words.

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost


ellie LeJeune
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18 posted 2001-01-18 06:39 AM


We four mystic friends are one
in quest and purpose true.
together shall we triumph
o'er evil and it's spells.
For mightier still our magic,
when joined as one in quest'
Pegasus, I feel your might
as we soar above this land.
Wordancer, as we gather
all you need to free Faire Queen,
I feel your purpose strong,
and your words and song so true.
Shalmond I feel a friendship bond,
that forms between us so.
Your bravest heart so mighty true,
has brought forth my magic gifts
to shine in this a noble quest.
Hold fast this little one,
lest I fall from off this flight.
My powers grow and so shall I,
in gift of friendship true.
For love shall conquer all,
and quest will we accomplish
to free our Fairy Queen.


A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

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19 posted 2001-01-18 08:16 PM


~ a departure...because I'm me   ~

amidst the brave and dark of heart
in wooded nook set well apart
live tiny grumpy stumpy folk
who never laugh who never joke
but when a conflict happens by
then do you hear the stumped cry!

" 20 to 1 on Peg to win!"
" 15 to 1 on Ellie "

" My gold's on Wordancer! Same for me!"
cheer all the folk with greedy glee

" Shalmond seems a handy sort.."
" 10 on Shalmond..jes for sport "

as all around the battle rings
the stumpy ones with praises sing
"Down with the Dark,Up with the Light!"
then back they sit to watch the fight...

Sol

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20 posted 2001-01-19 12:46 PM


Sighing, bored, waiting for fun
The Angels road-side stand awaits
Then through the grapevine it is heard
A story of four searching for a gate

Hearing of the song to be sung
She gathers her supplies
And into a bag of items galore
She places bee wax for the party of four

Adds a little amulet of luck
Some bread, cheese, a little wyne
Matches, kindling for a fire
A couple of blankets and some twine

Poking around she adds bandages
A handful of magical items for spells
Nightshade, graveyard dust, and such
Also some healing herbs as well

Then with a chuckle and a smile
She closes down her stand
Looks around closely, finds the gate
In the air, makes motions with her hand

The bag appears to float
It seems smaller than it is
All that's left is to add a note
"For Pegasus and all his friends.."


wordancer
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21 posted 2001-01-19 02:18 PM


In a moment of dreaming time,
     stranded in misty darken rhymes.

The weary four struggle to find their way,
     as they wander through night into day..

Out of parted silvered clouds there flies,
     the golden eagle who streaks the sky.

The goddess Diana has sent her gift,
     to guide them through the endless rift,

Howling winds buffet them side-to-side,
     a rather wild up-and-down scary ride.

All around the keening eagle darts,
     is all lost before the story truly starts?

Valiantly, the Pegasus strokes the wild wind,
     as he tries to reach the dark tunnel’s end.

Turns right into the forest of Trees-That-Be,
     in the distance a rounded portal they see.

With bated breath and surging brakes,
     they tumble down to the edge of the lake.

In a pile of ragged groans and flying skirts,
     they fall to wonder what other trouble lurks.




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wordancer
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22 posted 2001-01-19 02:22 PM


Sol/BWA, I'm delighted that you joined us...what a wonderful touch of local color you have provided.

"On with the story," the dancer laughs, as she adds more wood to the campfire.

"Come...dance with me, into my world of words."

Shalmond
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23 posted 2001-01-19 08:34 PM


Pray what kind of place can this be?
An eerie mist rises from yonder sea,
Daylights muted in opaque tones,
And oft I hear a grunt and groan.

Could the dragons’ lair from here be  far,
Shall I keep aready my scimitar?
The cold creeps in from this fog,
I'll add to the fire another log.

Ellie, myne clever elfin friend,
Doth thy powers any message send,
Is our band alone in this place,
Or will we here soon evil face?


Not all who wander are lost. J.R.R.Tolkien

ellie LeJeune
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24 posted 2001-01-19 08:52 PM


Huddled four round warmth of fire,
in misty dakened gloom of night.
Shalmond I hear the dragon near.
tis true his lair is yonder thus.
With my elfin sight, I darest see
into his evil lair and yet beyond.
the portal to the world we seek,
lies past his mighty evil force.
my eyes of elfin magic sight,
are filled with mystic wonder new.
A sleeping power emerges now,
I feel this power from within.
Mine eyes shall cast this evil one,
into a sleep that's deep and sound.
This dragon now will not wake,
ten thousand years from here till then.


pegasus111
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25 posted 2001-01-20 08:25 AM


Pegasus discovered the Angel's bag lying nearby. Reading the note, he smiled and examined the contents of the bag. "These charms will serve us well I think." Placing the amulet around his neck, he nodded to his companions."For luck," he said, smiling. "The Angel is a good friend to us."

"The Elf has cast a spell upon the dragon. It is safe for Shalmond to dive for the harp. We will wait here for his return. The Wordancer has recovered her disks and we will be ready to depart to seek the ram as soon as the harp is recovered."

With that, Shalmond dove swiftly into the murky water of the bog, swimming powerfully downward into the dragon's lair..They waited nervously for his return. Praying that the spell of the Elf was doing it's sleepy work.

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost


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26 posted 2001-01-20 09:13 AM


And for I not keeper of time,
Yet keeper of the phases of the moon,
Keeper of the sun,
Keeper of the glens and trees,
And natures hamonouis balance,
For I mother nature,
Turn the murkyness and sludge,
That has engulfed the dragons lair,
Turn to crystal waters,
And may the moon shine it's brightess,

Beware the magic will not last,
For without the harp in posscession,
Of our great fairy Queen,
I'm powerless to this day,
And the Golden Glen once lush,
And green,
Will be desolated with swamps,
And broken trees,
To be this dragons world.


< !signature-->

Life has got to chnage,
Nothing stays the same,
Soon it will be time,
For me to move on.





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Shalmond
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27 posted 2001-01-22 07:05 PM


I dive into the water dark,
Seeking harp, for magic spark,
To fuel the Fayire Queen with song,
Into the Lair, I don't belong.

The murky depths awash like ink,
Myne mission a loss, I think,
ALAS, the water sudden clear,
So crystal pure, the harp is near!

The Dragon hast it in his trove,
A treasure room into which I dove,
The Serpent lie there fast asleep,
The harp lies near within his keep.

Must not wake this serpent vile,
Regain the harp in cunning style,
I thus advavance so nonchalant,
Disturb his rest, I dare shant.

Only a short half meter away,
I swim with stealth about midway,
Keen my prize so near my grasp,
My lungs doth burn for air to gasp.

The Reptile EYE opens wide,
My advance he thus has spied,
Retreat, retreat my heart shouts,
Before he moves and leaves no outs.

I glance around a see a small cave,
Perhaps in there my life I'll save,
The Dragon can not enter in,
This entrance so small and thin.

Inside this cave I see a locket,
And up above a fresh air pocket ,
I raise myne head above the drink,
And gulp some air before I sink.

Can this locket be a talisman charm,
To keep me from the Dragons harm?
To the caves mouth I slowly go,
And peer out scanning for the foe.

No movement in the silent deep,
I swim back to the treasure keep,
I spy the harp and and grab hold,
Swimming past the piles of gold.

Up to the surface, no time to spare,
Running out of precious air.
I break the surface with harp in hand,
And swim to shore and dry land.

This time I guard my mission prize,
That there may be no suprise,
My friends, how odd, nowhere in sight,
Have they left on another flight?
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Not all who wander are lost. J.R.R.Tolkien

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pegasus111
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28 posted 2001-01-24 12:34 PM


We have returned for thee,
Shalmond, our friend,
and rejoice in thy success,
hold fast to the precious harp,
and mount swiftly,
we must be off to obtain
the Emerald Jewel
from the great ram,
before the assault on the wizard
may commence.
I have a plan to obtain the stone
but, I will need thy help.

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost


Shalmond
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29 posted 2001-01-24 08:42 PM


Mighty Pegasus, speak,
Thy humble servant heareth thee,
How mayest I be of service,
Thou can relyest on me!


Not all who wander are lost. J.R.R.Tolkien

pegasus111
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30 posted 2001-01-25 10:37 PM


the friends reached the pass overlooking the valley of the Ram and his flock just before sunset.

"See there, that old tree with the low sweeping branches," said Pegasus. "If we can get the Ram to catch his horns in the low branches, we may be able to extract the jewel without doing him harm."

"Does anyone have an idea on how to do this?"

All was quiet as they stood high above the valley floor. The setting sun reflected off the Emerald Jewel casting flashes of light in all directions. Each waited for the others to speak. Did anyone have a plan? Could it be done? Time was getting short. They must act soon.

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost


ellie LeJeune
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31 posted 2001-01-26 07:02 AM


Pegasus mine bravest friend,
my powers now I tame and know.
My sight that gives of light
and magic fire that flames,
I shall call forth at once,
to loose this gem of green.
Wordancer you of poet rhyme,
Wrap your lovely words around
to soothe the mighty beast,
while mine mystic light
and flame doth loosen Emerald
from on his mighty head.
Shalmond, my friend of strength,
hold his head to still it now.
Ah tis done, the stone is ours!
So now onward trusted friends,
to next step on this ever quest.  

pegasus111
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32 posted 2001-01-30 06:13 PM


well done, friends so brave and true
the jewel is ours, that precious hue
to brave the wraiths in forest dark
upon this quest we four embark

to free the queen of fairies all
upon her throne again install
free from harm, and wizard's clutch
adored by fairies all so much

so quickly mount my trusted friends
upon this back that lowly bends
and off to forest dark and deep
for appointments we must surely keep




the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost


wordancer
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33 posted 2001-02-04 05:51 PM


hush now
quietly pegasus steps through
the wrathful forest

bare trees
stretch their gnarled limbs
interlacing the dusky aire

no moon
ebony branches silhouettes
far horizon of night

the trees
timelessly peer bare faces
who dares trespass?

patiently waits
gnarled bark of endless time
in these darkening thickets

branches clack
as they reach out to touch
begone! begone!

trunks sway
enclose passage darkens
now a maze

pegasus snorts
wakens sleeping friends
quiet alarm

ellie LeJeune
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34 posted 2001-02-04 08:08 PM


This dark and terrible place
doth smell of evil profound,
the four fully awakened now,
can smell the evil wraiths,
horrid evil stench emanates.

Pegasus grasps the Emerald,
and tis at this moment
the wraiths appear, fangs
snarling, ready for blood.
In one might swoop of wing,
pegasus holds the Emerald,
in outstretched arm raised
and hurls this precious stone
at these ghoulish creatures.
green mist and anguished screams,
as the wraiths are consumed.
black acrid smoke tis all.

The forest is transformed.
in beauty beyond a dream.
For with evil now vanguished,
the sun prevails or glen,
and springtime meadows green.
The four brave souls rejoice.
Now to find the Wizard Fate,
who holds the Fairy Queen
in dark and evil spell so deep,
her mystic music not to sing.
What will the four a power of,
release her from this Wizard dark?

pegasus111
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35 posted 2001-02-05 12:22 PM


the four move on unhindered now
determined still to keep their vow
to rescue queen of fairies dear
they sence that she is very near

pegasus leads the friends with care
seeking the dark wizards lair
at last upon a clearing bright
they see the den as black as night

two windows shine with misty glow
there the four with stealth do go
shalmond checks the first small square
the room is empty, there’s nothing there

but inside the second ellie spies
a dreary scene that shocks her eyes
for there on table chipped and worn
the queen is caged, her face forlorn

in tattered gown on tiny chair
the beauty rests a captive there
the wizard now not in their veiw
the friends know well what they must do

with a mighty kick then well placed
the sturdy door is fast displaced
enter then the saviors four
confronted then by mighty roar

the wizard moves in purple haze
flashing staff, his eyes ablaze
with arms raised to celing high
their path to queen he would deny

now four must think with urgent speed
or to the wizard they must concede
the plight of fairy queen so true
who knows now what they can do?


the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost



Shalmond
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36 posted 2001-02-05 02:52 PM


Not stunned by the wizards ploy,
Shalmond leaps,all stength employ,
Catches the wizard by the sash,
Yanks it hard before the crash.

Lightning from the wizards eyes,
Cuts Shalmond down to size,
Shalmond reels, yet in motion,
Proves his verve, his quest devotion.

With one last mighty gasp,
The wand is snatched from wizards' grasp,
Across the room the wand doth sail,
Into the hands of his commrade, pale.

Wordancer, Peg and Ellie too,
Not sure what next to do,
Shalmond collapses from the wounds,
But smiles as his friends the fight resume.

Shalmond, the mighty warrior, friend,
His spirit from his body rend,
In a flash, his body dissapears,
Into the Hall of Heros his spirit nears.




Not all who wander are lost. J.R.R.Tolkien

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pegasus111
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37 posted 2001-02-06 12:29 PM


Shalmond’s loss did stun the three
sweet ellie sank to bended knee
the winged one for his friend did mourn
in the dancer’s eyes a fire was born

with grim smile her arm did raise
the magic stick held wizard’s gaze
sudden fear flashed in evil eyes
a vision of his swift demise

the stick shot forth a searing flame
the wizard’s shield it overcame
with piercing scream and sudden roar
the evil wizard was no more

gently then with heavy heart
with queen in hand they did depart
and somewhere in that forest glade
one last tribute to a friend they paid

the queen did seat the harp of gold
a song she sang for that warrior bold
a song to last for a thousand years
and even now it brings forth tears

from the three who once were four
their hearts a heavy burden bore
in memory of a dear lost friend
this tale now will come to end.
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my dear friends. I hope you enjoyed this as much as I did. until the next time.....




the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost




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wordancer
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Posts 809
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38 posted 2001-02-06 03:45 PM


alas and woe
as the fire burns low
the story  lingers

four friends were made
forsworn and forevermore
till the good night

brave battles fought
the queen safely retrieved  
a world set right

in silence
three comrades sit
words not needed

there is no time now
all the seasons have passed on
black night shines clear

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THE END




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