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raleighbttrfly
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Raleigh NC

0 posted 2001-01-04 09:52 AM


When it was your sole that forgot how to fly
It was a sin that made the angels cry
Your wings are broken and unused
Your face is dirty and now bruised

But even now your feet grow light
Healing begun by candle light
And in your mind you begin to sore
What was once a dream means so much more

A smile shows and is now real
The first singe you are beginning to feel
So much time has been lost
Time that came with a high cost

Unfold your wings and reach the sky
Now you know its time to try
Close your eyes and forgive
Learning again how to live



I am not always lonely even if I am always alone

© Copyright 2001 Amberlyn - All Rights Reserved
shira
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since 2000-12-12
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Hamburg, PA
1 posted 2001-01-04 11:40 AM


This is wonderful... and very inspirational. Nice work. I like this.
blackhalo
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Denver, CO
2 posted 2001-01-04 12:04 PM


Wonderful.  Simply beautiful...


In every memory, sweet or sad, we find a small piece of tomorrow.
Alicia A. Renzelman


raleighbttrfly
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3 posted 2001-01-05 09:44 AM


thank you both for saying such nice things

It's relay grate to get good reviews



I am not always lonely even if I am always alone

DawnG
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4 posted 2001-01-05 01:16 PM


This is very beautiful. I am trying to learn to live again. Thanks for the inspiration.

                                 Dawn

DawnG
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5 posted 2001-01-05 01:16 PM


This is very beautiful. I am trying to learn to live again. Thanks for the inspiration.

                                 Dawn

brian madden
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ireland
6 posted 2001-01-05 02:43 PM


Unfold your wings and reach the sky
Now you know its time to try
Close your eyes and forgive
Learning again how to live

lovely poem, I think we all go through times like this in life. enjoyed the read

It's in your eyes a fire that's wild and glorious
Unhibited, unfinished in everything I do Let the morning rise like our hearts desire" whipping boy

Wikket
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since 2000-01-29
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Santa Clara, CA USA
7 posted 2001-01-06 12:39 PM


Ah the struggle...to get back up and chase your dream, no matter how many times you get slapped down heading in that direction.  I really enjoyed this!  

~~Jamie        


I mean the opposite of what I say. You've got it now? No, it's the other way. ~Bruce Bennett

dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida
8 posted 2001-01-06 07:54 PM


very nice..i like the inspiration in this one..

we all get wounded as we make our way through the flight of life..if we can allow ourselves to heal, even by candle light, and learn to fly again, then we have truly conquered the dark!

hugs, g< !signature-->

"sometimes a closed door provides us with walls to lean on....."    
-kathleen vibbert




[This message has been edited by dgvarner (edited 01-06-2001).]

wordancer
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since 2000-07-30
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9 posted 2001-01-07 09:03 PM


quote:
Learning again how to live


Well done and nicely said...and life goes on and one might as well live it.



"Come...dance with me, into my world of words."

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