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a_little_girl
Member

since 2000-05-08

Posts 307
San Alejandro, HI, USA

0 posted 2001-01-03 10:58 PM

You blaze within me,
not a flame, but fire,
that no one but us can see.

I feel your strength, your power,
your heart and mine.
I have found my peace, for you I pine.

I have found my other piece,
to complete who is me,
no one else will fit.

The sun praises your face,
and graces your name,
for you, I am unworthy of feeling the flame.

I rejoice in saying it,
and you know its true,
but I really, truely, forever, love you.

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~~My soul lives in love, walks with serenity, writhes in hatred, and dies in violence.~~
Myself

[This message has been edited by a_little_girl (edited 01-03-2001).]

pegasus111
Member Elite

since 2000-07-27

Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa

1 posted 2001-01-04 03:50 AM

ahhh..ain't love grand..

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost

ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10

Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA

2 posted 2001-01-04 08:01 AM

Sigh.. "How do I love thee..." lovely romantic poem. Ellie

Belief is a truth held in the mind; faith is a fire in the heart.

Joseph Fort Newton

a_little_girl
Member

since 2000-05-08

Posts 307
San Alejandro, HI, USA

3 posted 2001-01-04 02:45 PM

pegasus-love can be grand, but it can also hurt A LOT.
Eliie-this was written for my boyfriend aka Little Spyro

~~My soul lives in love, walks with serenity, writhes in hatred, and dies in violence.~~
Myself

kcsgrandma
Senior Member

since 2000-09-24

Posts 1522
Presque Isle, ME

4 posted 2001-01-05 12:45 PM

Very pretty writing. I love the play on peace and piece.

He should enjoy this.

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

dgvarner
Member Elite

since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

5 posted 2001-01-06 11:23 PM

"The sun praises your face,
and graces your name"

i believe it does...
he is certainly a loved dragon around here!

very sweet write for your love..

hugs, g

"sometimes a closed door provides us with walls to lean on....."
-kathleen vibbert

wordancer
Senior Member

since 2000-07-30

Posts 809
VA

6 posted 2001-01-07 06:58 PM

How lovely, what a sweet read. I really enjoy this one little girl.

"Come...dance with me, into my world of words."

shira
Member

since 2000-12-12

Posts 88
Hamburg, PA

7 posted 2001-01-08 05:17 AM

Very warm, loving and heartfelt.. I know what this feels like, and its very well presented here. Nice poem.

a_little_girl
Member

since 2000-05-08

Posts 307
San Alejandro, HI, USA

8 posted 2001-01-08 06:20 PM

I don't really write romantic poetry. I just did this offhand, to change the mood a little. I have a tendency to do poems based on reality and life.

Lady Ollyne
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since 2001-01-08

Posts 337
East Coast

9 posted 2001-01-09 01:08 AM

Upon your face is written clear
Thy smile complete, in view.
Warmth that's held within thy heart
A treasure, strength of two.
Power, peace, of thou and thine
Together is a fit.
Grace befalls the both of you
As flame is surely lit...

Lady Ollyne...turning a few phrases for thee

"O, learn to read what silent love hath writ:
To hear with eyes belongs to love's fine wit"...Shakespeare

Yu Lan
Senior Member

since 2000-04-13

Posts 1462
New Zealand

10 posted 2001-01-10 07:44 PM

beautiful, a love worth writing.. I am sure Spyro will love it, it's the perfect poem! ^_^

Love,
Lynne

Gene
Senior Member

since 2000-01-23

Posts 935
Colorado, USA

11 posted 2001-01-10 09:07 PM

Your a_(very lucky)_little_girl, the Little Dragon is really a very fine young man.

~Gene

Romy
Senior Member

since 2000-05-28

Posts 1170
Plantation, Florida

12 posted 2001-01-11 09:15 AM

You've written a beautiful description of your love, nice job!

blackhalo
Member

since 2000-02-15

Posts 467
Denver, CO

13 posted 2001-01-11 12:36 PM

once again,
ahhh... so cute!
spyro is a great guy. I hope you guys will continue to make each other as happy as you seem to make each other right now.
best wishes.
Alicia A. Renzelman

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