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DawnG
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0 posted 2001-01-03 09:05 PM


                  My Love For You


You came into my life
Silently,
          Slowly,
                 Unaware,
From your words I knew you had to be there,
We had so much in common,
There was a bond from the start,
Your words, they just melted my heart.

Two weeks of heaven,
Two weeks of Joy,
A better Christmas present,
Could not be found.

Every night I know you more,
Our love just grows,
It never slows.

You want me to be me,
Maybe someday I'll understand,
Why you care so much.
Until then my love,
Be patient with me?
Cause my love for you will never end.




[This message has been edited by Callie (edited 01-03-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 Dawn - All Rights Reserved
Lost Dreamer
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Somewhere near the Rainbow
1 posted 2001-01-03 09:17 PM


Wow, Dawn this is a beautiful poem, full of love and happiness. May you always feel this wonderful for the reflection it has presented here is full of warmth.  
Jesse Jaymz
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Posts 708
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2 posted 2001-01-03 09:34 PM


i was almost the first to reply to this.  ehehehe  someone beat me.     *glances towards dreamer and laughs*  very beautiful and heart touching.  made a light shine for me on a very cloudy and sad day.  *huggles*
love ya
jesse


Once upon a time there was a light in my life, now theres only love in the dark, There's nothing I can do, a total eclipse of the heart.

kcsgrandma
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since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522
Presque Isle, ME
3 posted 2001-01-04 01:01 AM


How sweet and loving this is!  I am happy you found someone who loves you for you.  

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

pegasus111
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4 posted 2001-01-04 03:49 AM


lovely read..every once in a while we find someone special..hope this is your special person...

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost


ellie LeJeune
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5 posted 2001-01-04 07:58 AM


Dear Dawn: Apsolutely beautiful love poem and You deserve all that love....If he really does know the beautiful inner you, He is very blessed. Love, Ellie

Belief is a truth held in the mind; faith is a fire in the heart.

Joseph Fort Newton



Dennis L. White
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since 2000-02-17
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6 posted 2001-01-05 11:57 AM


Dawn,
  Another beautiful heartfelt poem, so tender and fragile, yet vibrant and alive!
I like this a lot!
Dennis :^)

Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has passed
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)


kelieth
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since 2000-06-12
Posts 314
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7 posted 2001-01-05 12:22 PM


Such a wonderous feeling and emotion I'm glad you have found.   Best of luck and wishes for you and your hearts sound.

Great expression in your poem.  


Kevin

"Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals."

brian madden
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ireland
8 posted 2001-01-05 02:06 PM


Dawn, beautiful poem, and I am glad that you have found some one special to share your heart's desires.

It's in your eyes a fire that's wild and glorious
Unhibited, unfinished in everything I do Let the morning rise like our hearts desire" whipping boy

dgvarner
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High Springs, Florida
9 posted 2001-01-06 11:49 PM


what a wonderful thing to be loved just for being you..for everything you are, even the things youre not, for everything you will be, for the dreams you dream, for the humor and the tears......everything...no matter what...

its just wonderful...!  

hugs, g


"sometimes a closed door provides us with walls to lean on....."
-kathleen vibbert



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10 posted 2001-01-09 12:31 PM


This was a sweet poem showing true devotion. Good luck with everything.


I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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