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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA 
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Rose arbor alight in the dark of predawn hour crystal flakes of snow falling upon this garden Oh the magic of it all! Belief is a truth held in the mind; faith is a fire in the heart. Joseph Fort Newton |
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Suzanne Arlene Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 377Ontario, Canada |
I can see your rose garden in my mind. It brings me warm thoughts of beautiful roses sleeping under softly fallen snow till springs breaths them awake.I love winter Thank you Ellie |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
It sounds enchanting, Ellie! Keep warm! Denise |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I really liked the emotion in this one. Very nice.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
charming piece indeed...i imagined a child staring in awe at this beautiful rose garden and this thought tugged my heartstrings even more....  |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
The imagery is magnificent and peaceful. Melton |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
You paint a magical picture, Ellie.  To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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wordancer Senior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 809VA |
Oh the wonder of it all...the knowing under the blanket of snow is summer sleeping! "Come...dance with me, into my world of words." |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
Oh I can definetley see the magic. I see a garden with vines growing on an abandoned garden shed, and the snow falling on them, making them crystal shells with little bits of green showing through. I could go on and on. Awesome tanka, Ellie! Joy |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Oh my ellie... such beauty in just a few lines ! Happy New Year  |
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