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Remembrance Of Roses - Haiku |
ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Three summer roses cling in frozen remembrance of beauty long past |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
Very pretty, Ellie. Nice to remember summer in this weather. Though it is freezing In my heart it is toasty Remembering love. < !signature--> To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn [This message has been edited by kcsgrandma (edited 12-29-2000).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very nice, both of them!! I wish I could write Haiku...can't seem to get the hang of it. Denise |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
the rose is such a beautiful way to express so many different emotions don't you think? your poem was lovely. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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wordancer Senior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 809VA |
Nice ellie, I can just picture the crystelized roses, frozen in a moment of time. "Come...dance with me, into my world of words." |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Marilyn; How delightful is your Haiku! Denise; thank you....I don't believe a word of it!! Pegasus; You are always so encouraging... Wordancer; Than you, I always look forward to your replies. Belief is a truth held in the mind; faith is a fire in the heart. Joseph Fort Newton |
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Suzanne Arlene Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 377Ontario, Canada |
Oh Ellie i do so love your poems.I have 1 frozen rose. I thought about cutting it off but i left it to remember summer when it bloomed so beautiful. Thank you Suzanne |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Your garden is delightful no matter the season Liz |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
So beautiful...*sigh* I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
nice reflection, ellie.... |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
You love your garden and it will soon return in the spring as beatiful as before. Melton |
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