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pegasus111
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since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa

0 posted 2000-12-26 07:44 AM


I wrote this piece some time ago on another site. I recently revised it for Passions...
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Red..for the fire in your eyes that ignites the flame in my loins

Blue..for the quiet deep feelings that stir my heart when I see your words

Grey.. for the ache in my soul because I am not near you

Green.. for the freshness of your smile and the sweet scent of your body

White.. for the purity of your unselfish love

Pink..for the glow of your skin after a warm tub

Yellow..for the hope of a new beginning

Purple.. because you are the princess of my heart

And finally Black..the absence of color, or age, or time, or space, or circumstances
              
You are my love, my rainbow after the storm.




the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost


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ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
1 posted 2000-12-26 08:52 AM


The analogy is sublime and the love you express, with poetic splendor, is beautiful!


Belief is a truth held in the mind; faith is a fire in the heart.

Joseph Fort Newton



wordancer
Senior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 809
VA
2 posted 2000-12-26 11:14 AM


ah peg, this is just as I remembered it even with the minor changes...will never look at the rainbow the same way again.

"Come...dance with me, into my world of words."

bestgirl911
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since 2000-10-04
Posts 551
Clio, MI , United We Stand
3 posted 2000-12-26 01:00 PM


Peg...

This is simply beautiful. A wonderful way to express the different ways to love.

Best

kcsgrandma
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since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522
Presque Isle, ME
4 posted 2000-12-26 06:35 PM


How sweet and romantic!     

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

pegasus111
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since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa
5 posted 2000-12-28 10:30 AM


thanks all for your reply..ain't love grand?...

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost


wordancer
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since 2000-07-30
Posts 809
VA
6 posted 2000-12-28 10:33 AM


Love be super....  
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