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wordancer Senior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 809VA 
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"Hello...can you hear me...so far away?" Heard a song echo through my heart just now, while I was standing beside the cold, dark window. Was that your voice resonating across my soul? Is it you, I see wandering in the stormy night? Slowly I reach out, tracing pictures in my breath, haunted by images of the calling past. Softly, I send your thoughts back to you. Do their ghostly echoes. . .linger, in the canyons of your heart? Hello...can you hear me...so far away? The storm thunders on; the winds drown out silent words. Lighting slashes the dark, and briefly I see you. . .lost in the ebony reflections. Closer to the pane I lean, staring at my lonely face; lost in the shadows of my heart I see you that are gone. My thirsty lips touch the cold window, through the incomprehensible glass I am unable to reach you. Now, is my song echoing. . . in the darkness of your mind? Hello...can you hear me...so far away? < !signature--> "Come...dance with me, into my world of words." [This message has been edited by wordancer (edited 12-20-2000).] |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
ahhhh...such beautiful words from the wordancer..lonely, yearning, wistful...I know it well..  the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
I hear you and the lonely, loveliness of this poem echos across the distance. You write very well. |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
This is lovely, Wordancer. You are a bright new star in the Pub's firmament. To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
WordDancer~ This is a well-imaged piece of melancholy moments. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
I can really relate to this, nice. Life has got to chnage, Nothing stays the same, Soon it will be time, For me to move on. |
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wordancer Senior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 809VA |
Peg, you know my words well. kcsgrandma, what a lovely thing to say...thank-you so much. songbird, marge,& maria...thanks for the read, this was one of my first poems that I wrote last year when I started my life as a poet...of course I didn't realize that then. "Come...dance with me, into my world of words." |
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bestgirl911 Senior Member
since 2000-10-04
Posts 551Clio, MI , United We Stand |
Wordancer.. Sad, Lonely, and hearbreaking but, beautiful. Great job. Best |
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