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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore 
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hey guys ... here's an 'always heard of story' ... love, michelle ------------------------------- A perfect smile Sweet almond face Silky black tresses Big doleful eyes This girl is so lucky Nature’s unique creation Yet her soul’s empty For she lives without love Her mind’s a complicated storm So smart and will so strong Her sweet serenades Wow crowds who hear her songs She sings melodies of love And sometimes of heartbreaks But she doesn’t really feel The beauty of them so great From oscars to grammies She has got it all But alas her entire life Has been a lonesome song This lucky girl they say She has got it all But who knows that her tears flow At night when she’s alone This almost perfect girl The word ALMOST I stress For living without love Is a damsel in distress If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Money and fame can't buy everything especially not real love. enjoyed reading. "an afixiation a fix on anything the line of life the limb of a tree the hands of he and the promise that s/he is blessed among women". Patti Smith |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
there is no perfection in this life..if there were, we wouldn't need heaven would we?..  very nice piece..I liked it a lot.the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Sad but true. Good poem ! I enjoyed it much.  |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
michelle, you make me wonder..must fortune and fame always be attained with the loss of close relationships....thought-provoking poem  yup, spore is the place hor where i reside lor  |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
Very nice, Michelle, in fact, almost perfect, and as Kaile says, thought-provoking. Good work.To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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Ara New Member
since 2000-12-19
Posts 7 |
A true story makes wonderful poerty if it comes from the heart ... I loved it *S* Ara~ |
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shira Member
since 2000-12-12
Posts 88Hamburg, PA |
These words are so true, and most people just dont realize it until after its too late. Nice poem, I liked it. |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
brian, pegasus111, Munda, kaile*winkZ*, kcsgrandma, Ara & shira : thanks guys 4 taking the time to read my piece, i'm so pleased that u enjoyed it! love, michelle If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MidnightBlues~ Very nice photograph of some famous stars whose lives are often lonely behind the scenes. Nicely done. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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