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Brought Up A Man |
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bb4thunder Junior Member
since 2000-12-17
Posts 12Berkeley, CA, U.S.A |
This is my first post here, I hope you like it... Brought Up A Man Sitting here at work atop this big CAT –“D” Thinking of you, what you mean to me Tearing the ground to push it around Pondering you, and the love that I’ve found. How can a man say the words that I feel How can a man say how your make my life real. How can a man say those soft prissy things How can a man say how you make his heart sing. I really don’t know the words I should say Oh how I can find, yes to find me a way. How hard it’s to share, when you grow up a man To tell you those things so you’ll understand. It’s not the things I was taught how to say I just don’t know, it’s just not my way To share from my soul, and from my heart To share what I feel when we're apart. I hope you can see when you look in my eye The softness I feel, that these rough hands belie I hope you will know, when I’m holding you tight The joy that you bring, and all the delight. Oh, that I had the words, to say how I care That I had the words, love that I could share I guess that I’ll do the best that I can Sometimes it is hard being brought up a man. By Thunder [This message has been edited by bb4thunder (edited 12-17-2000).] |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
WELCOME! Thunder; You just did say it all, and magnificently too! When you hand her this poem she will be delighted. I am looking forward to more of your poetry here. Ellie Belief is a truth held in the mind; faith is a fire in the heart. Joseph Fort Newton |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
Well, Thunder, you seem to have found the words with this piece..very strong first post.. welcome to passions..looking forward to more from you. ![]() the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Lady Lost Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 470 |
This is beautiful...you express your feelings perfectly. I am raising my own 'little' man & I hope that as he gets older he will be able to express his feelings this well. ...beth |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
Welcome to Passions, Thunder. You seem to me to be an extremely articulate man. ![]() ![]() To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
I am very happy to see u post here. I think you will enjoy this forum very much. Your poems are so expressive and from the heart. I know they will enjoy them as much as I have. Welcome, my friend and Aloha nui loa! hugs, Koko < !signature-->Passion,imagination and intellect running together... Poetry in motion~~~ Aloha with warmest regards, Koko [This message has been edited by KokoStewartKoomoa (edited 12-17-2000).] |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Thunder, First, Welcome to Passions and to the Corner Pub. Your poem about how a man can express his love and feelings for that special preson who makes his life meaningful is well written and thoughtful. Pull up a chair, have a drink and do tell us more! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has passed Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Welcome to Passions Thunder, you've expressed youself perfectly in this poem ![]() please check your email for a special greeting ![]() Maree "If my words could blanket the skies and fill every corner and crevice of this earth, still this wouldn't be enough" "Maree Russo" |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
welcome to passions! you picked a wonderful place to sit a spell ![]() i guess its hard sometimes to express your feelings, as so many men are taught that they shouldnt show their feelings..and i think thats sad.. ![]() ![]() keep writing! hugs, g "people who need people are the luckiest people..." barbra s. |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Oh...but you said it very beautifully ! Great first post and welcome to the Pub ! |
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kaile![]() ![]()
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
welcome to the corner pub ![]() ![]() i can relate..sometimes its just so hard to express myself verbally that i will rather pen my thoughts on paper on via email and show it to my friends... have you showed her this poem yet?i bet she will be delighted to receive this... |
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