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Ice Storm Haiku |
Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Ice coated branches Sparkle in the morning sun Crystal radiance 12-12-2000 |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
You make me cold only to warm me up Beautiful |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
ice crystals a southern dream Florida sun lol..nice piece Dennis the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
Sparkling ice crystals Deceptively are hiding Pretty destruction. Nice job, as always, Dennis, and this truly is a lovely picture, but we are still smarting from an ice storm of almost three years ago. To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Dennis~ < !signature-->Lighting up the morn Sparkling crystals of adorn Dance on the dawning ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] [This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 12-13-2000).] |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Lovely crystal tears winters morning spring so deep neath her icy storm Beatiful, Dennis...You are so masterful at these little wonders. love, Sis Belief is a truth held in the mind; faith is a fire in the heart. Joseph Fort Newton |
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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA |
I'm all iced in here And not going anywhere Glad to have you near! Everything is closed Freezing rain coats all our roads Slippery fun kids know! Wanted Christmas white My orders messed up, all right Back order in sight? Thanks Dennis for getting us started on the Icestorm theme--God has provided the illustrations! Yo'Bro, David To put together words & rhyme--and touch a life--is so sublime! Thank God for such precious contact! (D.L.White) |
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shira Member
since 2000-12-12
Posts 88Hamburg, PA |
Dirty ice crystals Hanging from long horse whiskers Winter ornaments Nice thread started here! Everyone's additions are wonderful too! -Shira |
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Suzanne Arlene Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 377Ontario, Canada |
Funny how those ice storms can be so pretty but so devastating as well.Great poem |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
i like the calm, serene read here.. |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Loved it Dennis. |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
If only Irish winters were as beautiful.... wonderful poem. "an afixiation a fix on anything the line of life the limb of a tree the hands of he and the promise that s/he is blessed among women". Patti Smith |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Ah for a minute I was there Life has got to chnage, Nothing stays the same, Soon it will be time, For me to move on. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was beautiful!! I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA |
In it's aftermath My power being out for days It's beauty, all gone. As I wander out Devastation everywhere Trees and Lines brought down. How can crystal bright Wonders of nature so neat wreak such ugliness? Boy, did we get a dose of it!!!!! To put together words & rhyme--and touch a life--is so sublime! Thank God for such precious contact! (D.L.White) |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
well of course i love this..! i used to live in north carolina..the crystal covered branches in the winter were sooo beautiful! btw..i recently found your 'weary traveler' in my download file!! wow! very wonderful THAT was keep up the great writing den! hugs, g "people who need people are the luckiest people..." barbra s. |
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bb4thunder Junior Member
since 2000-12-17
Posts 12Berkeley, CA, U.S.A |
very nice imagery, enjoyable read.. nice to meditate.. Thunder. |
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kindasorta Member
since 2000-12-02
Posts 56 |
interesting! I feel like I just read a summary sheet. yes, sometimes lasting years kc??? talk about hang on's! it was pretty but it will be messy marvin. |
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