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Wobbly Head Bob Member
since 2000-05-15
Posts 299Virginia, USA |
I lost my elbow Over there At first it was right here Retrace the time I punched a mime It worked just fine I fear I'm elbowless into The night How will I rest my head Nightmares attack Mimes do hit back Wish I knew what was said "Where's My Elbow?" The paper ad I took it yesterday, Bends To and Fro My Loved Elbow; 3-4-1 Tepster Way "One elbow for Delivery!!!" I rushed to get the door In black and white His shirt on tight I nearly hit the floor He handed me my Lost elbow The Mime that I had faught Now it begins My arm it bends! Then I punched him a lot |
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Suzanne Arlene Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 377Ontario, Canada |
i liked it Glad you got your elbow back Nothing worse than missing body parts . |
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Elizabeth
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since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
LOL! Very funny...now this sounds like Dr. Seuss! Was this for the Seuss challenge? |
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raleighbttrfly Member
since 2000-11-21
Posts 160Raleigh NC |
Cute vary cute, I loved it. (but i think you might have lost your head to lol j/k)  I am not always lonely even if I am always alone |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
The hated mime gets hurt again.. This reminds me of a paradoy we did in high school ... Very amusing.  |
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Swamp¤Faeryie Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 393fairyland....of course;) |
call me silly,but abstract (a.k.a. "bored" poetry) poetry is one of my favorite kinds of poetry. I loved this!! swamp "Though thy crest be shorn and shaven,thou "i said" art sure no craven." Ghastly grim and ancient raven,wandering from the nightly shore,tell me what |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
LOL Left me with a smile Bob. |
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Wobbly Head Bob Member
since 2000-05-15
Posts 299Virginia, USA |
Thanks to everyone who has read and posted something!  Elizabeth--->I didn't know there was a Dr. Suess competition, had I known I wouldn't have put this together so hastly and might have taken a little more time wording and structuring. Thanks again people! |
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blackhalo Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467Denver, CO |
WHB, Very cute, indeed. I am so glad to hear that your elbow was finally returned, and that you punched the life out of that mime! Not that I'm a violent person or anything!  Waiting to see more like this, where are they? Alicia A. Renzelman |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
what are elbows for... but beating up mimes with... apologises to any mimes out there... screw apologises, you guys can't answer back...  enjoyed the poem. "an afixiation a fix on anything the line of life the limb of a tree the hands of he and the promise that s/he is blessed among women". Patti Smith |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Well, I thought it was very original!! Very !!! "If you live to be a hundred, I want to live to be a hundred minus one day, so I never have to live without you." Winnie the Pooh |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was really funny! I liked it tons! I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Wobbly Head Bob Member
since 2000-05-15
Posts 299Virginia, USA |
Wow, thanks everyone for posting responces to this, I didn't expect for it to be received so well! *lol* With all the poems about the broken hearted, I thought it'd be good to throw out a little change of pace! Be on the look out for "Now where'd I put my teeth?" *jk* |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
WOB! so good to see you..(whos been gone..you or me?? LOL) this is truly humorous..especially at this late..uh..veeerry early hour..what the heck am i doin up!! you know..i lose my poetry sometimes..even wrote a poem about losing poetry...lol but my elbow..well..i just couldnt do without my elbow man.. teehee!! love this hugs, g "people who need people are the luckiest people..." barbra s. |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
weellll.......hahhahahaa Wobbly now this is really humorous...a saga bout a lost elbow well......ehhehhe this is fresh! love, michelle If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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