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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore 
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somethin related to my insomnia which has bugged me for 3 yrs.... love, michelle ------------------------------- spirals and spirals spheres of darkness sweeping my mind round feelin i could drown i'm trying i'm crying prying away at my mind i'm sick i'm desperate i badly need some sleep! groping and groping down the rope to hazy but what's that tugging argh i'm chugging back to reality dearie oh dearie me can't u juz fall asleep all these daily routines its a wonder i'm still alive survived from every fatigue i juz hate this every nite battling its juz too baffling i think i'm blabbering round and round spirals in my mind no day no night try as i might i juz can't fight don need to feel sorry for me this juz has to be my plight it might juz decide one day to take flight away from my side tata for now i guess i'm bushed let the thoughts come to me i'm surrendering see slowly by slowly i guess i'll climb down the well of sleep tomorrow i shall wake up wif panda eyes so big but a dab of concealer will hide all traces of my fight at night --------------------------------------- If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
I could almost feel your struggle in this poem. Great job, althought, being a foreigner, I had a rather hard time reading your poem. (with all the "juz, wif, i and don) I suppose it's high time for "the new American language dictionary". ; ) |
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Wobbly Head Bob Member
since 2000-05-15
Posts 299Virginia, USA |
Ugh, I can feel the pains of sleep deprivation in your words! This poem has awesome style thats in no short supply! I hope the insomnia gives you a break every now and then. Thanks for the read. |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
so...I'm not the only one with the problem...in my case it's age..and in yours......?  the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
Ohh... I've been there, am there now actually. Switching from a night to a day schedule is difficult. This was well written. |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Munda - thanks, really for taking time to figure out this ... actually i'm not american ... i'm singaporean chinese, i guess the juzes and stuff lidat came from mi chatting thru alamak ... glad u liked it... really *S* Wobbly - hehehe well tat comment's real kewl ... hhahahaa if oni insomnia can gif mi a new poem each time ... well i guess i'll switch mi job from bein a beauty advisor to a poet!!!! glad u enjoyed this *huGz* Pegasus111 u haf insomnia too? mine is due to mi stupid brain being too active ... got it when i wuz 15 ... now i'm 18, i still get it now and then, but i've learnt to take it by stride and still wake up optimistic and perky ... izit buggin u bad? i had a hard time gettin used to it though BWA - wow i guess we can all form a gang of pandas! hahahahaha thanks buddy dearies thanks for taking the time to read mi some sorta like diaries...i really appreciate all ur comments and hope that our bond'll grow stronger thru our interests and thoughts! love, michelle If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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DawnG 
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
This is really very good. I too hate those nights of insomnia. Dawn |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
michelle, welcome back!  singaporean chinese huh..me too leh...so surprised to see a fellow mate gracing the blue pgs of this forum, you know..me dun feel alone anymore.... well i dun hav exactly hav insomnia but i do hav weird sleeping habits..i sleep at 2 am in the morn and sleep like a pig throughout the afternoon...my lao ma keeps nagging at me to sleep "correct"....  |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
ahhhh yep me too, some days I get no sleep at all, but I love the way you conjured it up in poem Life has got to chnage, Nothing stays the same, Soon it will be time, For me to move on. |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
Pchew.. ^^ hehe, well. I like ur poem! And I'm glad I can sleep alright, hehe.. and I'm sorry to hear of that.. -Lynne |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Dawn - mi 2 ..... isn't it juz hellish? kaile - i'm truly surprised! s'porean chinese huh? wow u living in s'pore now too? hey now i knoe tat i'm not alone too! ^5! ehhehehe u nite cat .....mi too.....used to stay up til 4-5am reading books.....hahaha now cannot liao...coz gotta work Maria - poor us! hehehe glad u liked it Lynne - so nice to see u again! well u sure are lucky huh...heh love, michelle If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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