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dena*mystrawberries Junior Member
since 2000-10-15
Posts 15 |
He slept next to me last night shared my bed soundly and I waited for a short breath a whisper I hoped for a touch and I rested alone He slept next to me last night shared my bed soundly and I waited for a caress a laugh I hoped for murmurs and I rested alone He slept next to me last night shared my bed soundly and I waited for love confirmation I hoped for an embrace and I rested alone He slept next to me last night shared my bed soundly and he woke with whiskey soured breath a headache said goodbye and I slept alone |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
hmmm..you got the wrong person in your bed..  the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
now that wuz sad .... =( but lovely..... keep posting!! love, michelle If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Unfortunately hope and reality too often are two different things. You describe it well ! |
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Wobbly Head Bob Member
since 2000-05-15
Posts 299Virginia, USA |
Dena...I know this feeling! OH you've described it exactly, the hope, excitement, anticipation, met with nothing...a goodbye. I felt this deep in my heart. Thanks for the read! |
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dena*mystrawberries Junior Member
since 2000-10-15
Posts 15 |
thank you for your feednack guys....also, if anyone can give me some style and format tips, i would appreciate it more than you know... pegasus...lol..right guy...I blame this one on the bed michelle....it's not sad...okay, well, it's a little sad...i'm not sure.. munda...i prefer the dream world in this one... bob...in that case, i wish it had been you |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
I know this feeling. I hope you find someone who can sense your needs in bed...  I'm not sure that sounds the way it should..  |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
When did you stay over at my house No, seriously, this is a sad piece, and I hope it's not a personal experience! "Always be a first rate version of your self instead of a second rate version of someone else." Marilyn Monroe |
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shira Member
since 2000-12-12
Posts 88Hamburg, PA |
How sad, yet how true to life for some of us. I see I am far from alone in these feelings. Wonderfully done. I really liked this. -Shira |
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blackhalo Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467Denver, CO |
C S R Y A D I N T E *G* ARS This is very sad. I hope that you will soon find the man who should be in your bed. Like, TODAY! Good Luck Alicia A. Renzelman |
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dena*mystrawberries Junior Member
since 2000-10-15
Posts 15 |
jeez...you guys really know how to make a gal feel pathetic..lol...it really isnt that bad...its just one of those things....i gotta tell you guys, though..when he smiles..well it's incredible.... |
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