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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Seeing the deicate petals, < !signature-->And the morning dew settled, I see the beauty of a rose, The sweet scent smell, Of delicate perfume, I smell the beauty of a rose, Touching the petals, And watching them fall, I feel the beauty of a rose, The rain falls gently, The wind whispers slowly, I hear the beauty of a rose, Then you taught me, Of something uneasy to find, I have the taste of the beauty of a rose. Life has got to chnage, Nothing stays the same, Soon it will be time, For me to move on. [This message has been edited by Maria Byrne (edited 12-05-2000).] |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
all I can say is..mmmmmm...*sigh*  the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
Ahh...what a wonderful thing it is, the rose. Very nicely written. |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
UP!!! cause it's too pretty to go away just yet.. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
A fresh expression of my favorite topic! What is that you express in your eyes? It seems to me more than all the words I have read in my life. Walt Whitman |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
I really liked the first 4 stanzas, but somehow my Dutch mind can't figure out the last one. Would you mind explaining it to me ? |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Pegasus - thanks for keeping it going for a bit longer BWA - Thanks Irish Rose - your fave flower is the rose huh? Munda - Guess I never meant it to be just about a rose Life has got to chnage, Nothing stays the same, Soon it will be time, For me to move on. |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
a rose is a rose is a rose and this is a beautiful poem about roses... really enjoyed read this piece. "an afixiation a fix on anything the line of life the limb of a tree the hands of he and the promise that s/he is blessed among women". Patti Smith |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Thanks brian Life has got to chnage, Nothing stays the same, Soon it will be time, For me to move on. |
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