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The Pink Moon |
Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
The Pink Moon Just above the horizon The moon hung Blushing pink Just beyond my sight The sun threw her a kiss And that is why she blushed I think |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SongBird~ This is just a delightful glimpse of that little flirt of a moon. And what a quick move by that little sun of a gun ! I really enjoyed this. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
This is charming! So much freshness in so few words! To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Songbird, smiling here this filled me with warmth, beautiful! Maree "If my words could blanket the skies and fill every corner and crevice of this earth, still this wouldn't be enough" "Maree Russo" |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
wonderful read.. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
I love this |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
So that's why the moon turns such a delightful shade of red on occassion... Really enjoyed this!! |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
A lovely perspective... thanks for the read... |
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shira Member
since 2000-12-12
Posts 88Hamburg, PA |
This was very nice, and displayed wonderful imagery. -shira. |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
This is really cute. Thanks for sharing it with us. Dawn |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This is such an original piece, wow! I mean, it really touched me.... "Always be a first rate version of your self instead of a second rate version of someone else." Marilyn Monroe |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I really liked this poem. Very creative!! I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
Thank guys, that pink moon was just begging me to tell his story. Surprized myself on this one. |
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