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Suzanne Arlene Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 377Ontario, Canada |
There is a woman buried deep in me She is so hard to find She is so hard to see Why she hides in there i really don't know i just try to protect her Where else can she go She must like it there in the silence of the dark wondering around aimlessly oblivious and stark Me, I know she is there Doesn't really bother me Can't figure out why she's there though, but i just let her be One day she'll come out and see life all around but for now i will just wait until she is found [This message has been edited by Suzanne Arlene (edited 12-09-2000).] |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Lovely poem! I think the woman inside is very beautiful and somebody needs to tell her so! Why don't you let her know that she is wonderful and precious and that it is safe to come out and enjoy her own loveliness. I did that for myself, and it was the best gift I ever gave myself! Ellie Belief is a truth held in the mind; faith is a fire in the heart. Joseph Fort Newton |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
I wonder how many of us have a hidden person inside. My guess is, a lot of us do. Ellie's right, give her a little love, and maybe she will come out and let the world see her real beauty. Very interesting reading here.  To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
yup, interesting is the word...i think most of us can relate to this becos we put on a front so as to prevent ourselves from getting hurt... i enjoyed the read  |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
ahhh..another version of "The Mask"...well done. you might want to take another look at the word "barried"... the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Suzanne Arlene Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 377Ontario, Canada |
She comes out mostly in poetry otherwise She is safer inside for now. She will know when it is ok to come out. Thank you all for your very kind words. It made me cry. Thank you for telling me about my typo Pegasus I hate when i do that. |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Enjoyed the read, I know a woman such as her. Wonder what she will be like if and when she emerges. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Suzanne~ Tenderly done. Sometimes there is a delicate other in us - that needs the shelter of hiding for a while. I think it's like you said - 'she will know' ... and when that time comes,she will emerge. Pleasing to read. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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shira Member
since 2000-12-12
Posts 88Hamburg, PA |
This was beautiful, and I can truly relate to this as my life takes a new turn, and I am seeing the woman in me come out to look. Wonderful. -shira |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
There's so many lines in here that just jump out at me. A very enjoyable poem! |
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