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Broken_Winged_Angel
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 994
Small Town, Somewhere

0 posted 2000-12-08 08:46 AM



Tries to speak
No words come
Watches the sinking moon
And rising sun

Stars fade to nothing
In a sky so red
Like soldiers in war
And all the blood-shed

Night slowly dies
As a new day is born
Trudges, with head down
Follows the path less worn

More often than not
Tears should be cried
But behind a weary smile
They continue to hide

Every now and again
The path intercedes
With one more worn
Brings new people to meet

A brief hello
And briefer goodbye
The sun fades
Into another lonely night...

With a little piece of tomorrow,
You'll have to kiss yesterday goodbye.
Because today won't last forever,
And the past will only make you cry.

© Copyright 2000 Angel - All Rights Reserved
pegasus111
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since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa
1 posted 2000-12-08 08:50 AM


this reeks of lonely despair..well done Angel..hope it's not you, dear

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost


pegasus111
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since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa
2 posted 2000-12-09 03:55 PM


up!!  cause it's too pretty to go away just yet..

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost


Marge Tindal
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Florida's Foreverly Shores
3 posted 2000-12-11 11:34 PM


BrokenWingedAngel~
This is a sad write -
but there's beauty in it's telling.
*Hugs*

*Did you by any chance catch a look
at this one I posted in Open #11 ?
I think you'll enjoy it -
/pip/Forum43/HTML/001275.html
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

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