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kindasorta Member
since 2000-12-02
Posts 56 |
easy unreason 12-7-00 dear, dear tormented child simply put, should I help you? ever residing in your self image structure nearing that of god-like status boldly proclaimed-- that all may know of your induced grandure, not that one should witness but placed on notice of such. tisk, tisk, put away your toys for those of like minds who willingly bow before you to be turned away by such, the very act which you desire yet detest, wanting, needing, confused to start over again looking for a power not given to man, displayed and used for purpose of your own hand. put away these thoughts with the toys for a richer, deeper purpose. consumed with thoughts of status willed by yourself, you become blind, unable to see what is necessary to succeed in life eternally. disguistingly, you write the grandest words of assalt attacking yourself, blindly, inflicking pain at willed write to promote your cause... god-like status, apology for appearance of lesser statused love, unable to comphrend-- why stoop to such a level? you pause, yet there stooped. misguided and misconseptions, yet assuring self, all is well- as you have spoken such. afterall," I am the prize", you believe. as you sigh and run your hands over my face, praying your eyes can speak above your inadequacies, you have failed miserably. all I hear are your words, boldly spoken and taken into my bosom for accountablity of who you are and as you speak for your heart I fear your prayers allowing your eyes to speak, must first be able to look, not blindly, before the eyes may learn the language of truth. least, you are toying with your toys and playing the silly little boyish games with lots of fun, you may present yourself to said friends in such manners, spouting written words at will. In the end, it is always just for fun and games? no one getting hurt you say, least not you, the principal. afterall, it's just you and kids at play. (your logic-your image-your projection-your self-worth). ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Hi all, my first time to post and just had these thoughts about my friend who can't understand why no one ends up liking him because of his lack of respect for them. Hope this helps him. Thanks for reading. |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
isn't it sad that some people get so caught up in themselves that they don't have time for anyone else? well said.. welcome to passions. I hope you stay a while with us. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
Welcome to passions... Nicely written. I hope to see more from you. With a little piece of tomorrow, You'll have to kiss yesterday goodbye. Because today won't last forever, And the past will only make you cry. |
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kindasorta Member
since 2000-12-02
Posts 56 |
..upon reading this, I wrote with a less than kind heart, I ask my friend to forgive me for the cruel words spoken from me. I should have had a kinder spirit, instead, wrote in haste with a mean spirit. I ask your forgiveness for my lack of concern of your feelings. I am sorry as I ask forgiveness from God. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Hi Kindasorta Welcome to passions liked your poem, pretty powerful and straight to the point. Sometimes we says things in haste and when we look back, we realise that maybe we were a little harsh, but that is human nature great poem. please check your email for a special greeting Maree "If my words could blanket the skies and fill every corner and crevice of this earth, still this wouldn't be enough" "Maree Russo" |
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