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kindasorta
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since 2000-12-02
Posts 56


0 posted 2000-12-08 12:38 PM



easy unreason
12-7-00


dear, dear tormented child
simply put, should I help you?
ever residing in your self image structure
nearing that of god-like status
boldly proclaimed-- that all may know of your induced grandure,
not that one should witness but placed on notice of such.

tisk, tisk, put away your toys for those of like minds
who willingly bow before you
to be turned away by such, the very act which you desire
yet detest,
wanting,
  needing,
   confused
to start over again looking for a power not given to man,
displayed and used for purpose of your own hand.
put away these thoughts with the toys for a richer, deeper purpose.

consumed with thoughts of status willed by yourself,
you become blind, unable to see what is necessary to succeed in life eternally.
disguistingly, you write the grandest words of assalt
attacking yourself, blindly, inflicking pain at willed write to promote your cause...
god-like status, apology for appearance of lesser statused love, unable to comphrend--
why stoop to such a level? you pause, yet there stooped.

misguided and misconseptions, yet assuring self, all is well-
as you have spoken such. afterall," I am the prize", you believe.

as you sigh and run your hands over my face, praying your eyes can speak above your inadequacies, you have failed miserably.  all I hear are your words, boldly spoken and
taken into my bosom for accountablity of who you are and as you speak for your heart
I fear your prayers allowing your eyes to speak, must first be able to look, not blindly,
before the eyes may learn the language of truth.  least, you are toying with your toys
and  playing the silly little boyish games with lots of fun, you may present yourself to
said friends in such manners, spouting written words at will.  In the end, it is always just
for fun and games?  no one getting hurt you say, least not you, the principal.  afterall,
it's just you and kids at play. (your logic-your image-your projection-your self-worth).
              ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~


Hi all, my first time to post and just had these thoughts about my friend who can't understand why
no one ends up liking him because of his lack of respect for them.  Hope this helps him.  Thanks for reading.

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pegasus111
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since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa
1 posted 2000-12-08 12:57 PM


isn't it sad that some people get so caught up in themselves that they don't have time for anyone else?  well said.. welcome to passions. I hope you stay a while with us.


the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost


Broken_Winged_Angel
Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994
Small Town, Somewhere
2 posted 2000-12-08 08:13 AM


Welcome to passions... Nicely written.  I hope to see more from you.  

With a little piece of tomorrow,
You'll have to kiss yesterday goodbye.
Because today won't last forever,
And the past will only make you cry.

kindasorta
Member
since 2000-12-02
Posts 56

3 posted 2000-12-08 01:34 PM


..upon reading this, I wrote with a less than kind heart, I ask my friend to forgive me for the cruel words spoken from me. I should have had a kinder spirit, instead, wrote in haste with a mean spirit. I ask your forgiveness for my lack of concern of your feelings.  I am sorry as I ask forgiveness from God.
Dark Angel
Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095

4 posted 2000-12-09 01:54 AM


Hi Kindasorta
Welcome to passions  

liked your poem, pretty powerful and straight to the point.
Sometimes we says things in haste and when we look back, we realise that maybe we were a little harsh, but that is human nature  
great poem.

please check your email for a special greeting  

Maree

"If my words could blanket the skies
and fill every corner and crevice of
this earth, still this wouldn't be enough"
"Maree Russo"


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