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raleighbttrfly
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since 2000-11-21
Posts 160
Raleigh NC

0 posted 2000-12-06 08:35 PM


Oh, how you pluck my hart strings
You have memorized the cords
With each verse you play I lose me self a little more

This mystic tune I can not brake free
Each note brings me closer to my knees
Verse by verse addicted more and more
Will you not stop till I am a heap of nothing huddled on the floor

Your guilty tune manipulates my hart
I weep or laugh by your demand
My emotions no longer mine to command
How you timed this well I don’t remember the start

I am your puppet
You make me dance alone
But in the shadows I see you
There you are  playing on
This eerie melody
You used to trap me
My self is almost gone



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Broken_Winged_Angel
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 994
Small Town, Somewhere
1 posted 2000-12-07 04:18 AM


Oh wow.  This so makes me think of my ex-finace.  Well written and I can't wait to read more from you.  
raleighbttrfly
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since 2000-11-21
Posts 160
Raleigh NC
2 posted 2000-12-07 07:54 AM


thank you Angel, I would not say that this is about my exfinace but Im sure he is in there to. Glade you could relate.
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