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Solstice Son
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0 posted 2000-12-01 03:58 PM


That night with Nessie did we spend.
Safe from the banshee's might.
All about her homey cave,
The Fae shone clear and bright.

I puffed my pipe,I laughed, I sang.
Content by the Guardian of Loch Ness.
I watched as Squatch was dancing,
with Lady in her tartan dress.


Bunny and Fairies traded tales,
Of the past Two thousand years.
And then....with little fanfare
The Lady Destiny appeared.

She perched upon my shoulder,
Her smile plain to see.
" I see you got my message." she grinned...
" And how are you Nessie?"

" Oh Des!" she cried " I'm happy!"
" For so long I've been blue."
" What a way to have a birthday!"
" Sol and Squatch to my rescue!"

'It's your birthday? ' I remarked.
Nessie nodded happily.
" Today I am four thousand two!"
" No, wait! Four thousand three!!"


Then all the fairies hushed.
And wide grew Nessies eyes..
As the King and Queen of Atlantis,
From the water did they did rise.

" Good Guardian of Atlantis!"
" Sweet Sentinel of Loch Ness!"
" We've come to help all celebrate!"
" And your name we both do bless!"

A mighty cheer went up that night.
From Nessie's homey cave.
Many 'thankyous' were exchanged
By all of those now saved.

And high above us on the Loch...
Some fishermen with good ears...
Blinked and marveled at the sound...
Of our Happy Birthday cheers......

© Copyright 2000 Adam M.M. Stevanovic' - All Rights Reserved
Romy
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since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170
Plantation, Florida
1 posted 2000-12-02 12:05 PM


Without a doubt, most delightful!
I admire your imagination and truly enjoy Squatch and the gang!
Thanks for sharing!

Moon Dust
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2 posted 2000-12-02 09:25 AM


Good job

Life has got to chnage,
Nothing stays the same,
Soon it will be time,
For me to move on.


Dopey Dope
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San Juan, Puerto Rico
3 posted 2000-12-02 09:58 PM


You know how much I adore these wonderful tales. Thanks for letting all of us read such imaginative stories. I loved them all!



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!


pegasus111
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since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa
4 posted 2000-12-03 01:00 PM


this is truly a fine epic fantasy..sooo good.

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost


Dennis L. White
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since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.
5 posted 2000-12-03 02:53 PM


SOL,
  Wonderful conclusion to a terrific adventure, the magic, the conflict the resolution, and the victory/birthday celertation! WOW, what more could we ask for?
Dennis :^)


Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has passed
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)


kaile
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singapore
6 posted 2000-12-04 02:10 AM


what else can i say? perhaps, keep up the good work and i trust we will hear more of Squatch and his gang, right
Solstice Son
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since 2000-09-19
Posts 469

7 posted 2000-12-05 07:29 AM


* smiles and blushes* You are all welcome....
I have had the greatest time writing these (( and yes there are more...too many actually *L* ))


I shall see you all soon.....

Sol

Suzanne Arlene
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since 2000-10-09
Posts 377
Ontario, Canada
8 posted 2000-12-05 11:26 AM


Good story Sol     Loved every one.It was funny and adventurous   Look forward to more  Suzanne
Broken_Winged_Angel
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 994
Small Town, Somewhere
9 posted 2000-12-07 04:26 AM


*applause*  Time will find me waiting avidly for the next in your story line hon... And shall I not see them soon, you are very much so book marked in my library..    Wonderful ending!!
Solstice Son
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10 posted 2000-12-07 07:27 AM


Suz....thank you...there are more...but I am waiting....lest I run out too soon *L*(( no worries...never happen))

BWA...applause??? * hugs all over* Thanks hun...and whenever you are here...there shall be something  


Sol

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