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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore 
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Hello dearest fellow poets! I'm back......golly u guys get better by the day...and the others...i'm so ashamed of miself!!!... here's one after such a long break......puhleeZ be gentle? love, michelle --------------------------------------- when the night falls and memories bring tears to your eyes when you think that you're alone think twice lay your head down have a good sleep forget bout her u need a break thinkin of her your heart will only ache i'm always behind you juz don realise you're thoughtful and sweet juz abit shy wake up tomoro and i'll be gone by then too your pain shall be withdrawn upon your next heartbreak i shall be here again to chase away your tears and soothe every fear one thing you won't know is that i'm in love with you but being your guardian angel we're juz from different worlds ---------------------------------------- If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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raleighbttrfly Member
since 2000-11-21
Posts 160Raleigh NC |
well I have never read your other work since I'm so new here but that was lovly. I don't know if you wrote this from personal experince or not, but if you did I know what its like to love from a distance. Grate pome I hope to find more. |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Ah love the emotion expressed, almost too famillar  Great poem p.s. he's lucky to have a friend like you. Life has got to chnage, Nothing stays the same, Soon it will be time, For me to move on. |
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nicolette Junior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 42St. Paul, Minnesota |
Nothing to be gentle on...this is a great poem. I have never read your work before and I really enjoyed this one. I hope he realized you love him soon because he is so lucky to be loved like that. |
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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA |
Midnight, I like your from different worlds, guardian angel approach to love from a far. It was an interesting & heart warming read! DavidTo put together words & rhyme--and touch a life--is so sublime! Thank God for such precious contact! (D.L.White) |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
upon your next heartbreak i shall be here again to chase away your tears and soothe every fear one thing you won't know is that i'm in love with you but being your guardian angel we're juz from different worlds He is a very lucky guy to have yor caring friendship. A lovely read! Maree "If my words could blanket the skies and fill every corner and crevice of this earth, still this won't be enough" "Maree Russo" |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
Hi Michelle. Welcome back! Yes, I too enjoyed the gaurdian angel twist. What a great way to bring the poem together. Joy |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
Hi Michelle. Welcome back! Yes, I too enjoyed the gaurdian angel twist. What a great way to bring the poem together. Joy...to the world |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
raleighbttrfly, hope to read ur poems soon! bet they'll be as sweet as u! Thanks! Maria, yeah i guess at one point of our lives we seem to merge friendship and attractions into one huh...and my those sweet confusions...i juz can't get enuff of that...*S* i'm glad u like it nicolette, u're so kind! thanks for taking the time to read my poem, i hope to see urs soon! David, i'm touched by ur comments! u're definitely still a dear *S* Maree, thanks! i'm glad u enjoyed this...... ^_^ Joy, i'm so glad to be back! thanks a load! ooh i'm so touched! thanks for makin me feel rite at home in a jiffy! love, michelle If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
this was a nice read, Michelle..looking forward to more. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
Michelle, if you had just slapped me I couldn't be rendered more speechless...I've sat here for just about 20 minutes trying to come up with something to say ... and all I can do is.. Wow. Very good and I can't wait to hear more from you.  Always, BWA Nicole. |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Pegasus111 - glad u enjoyed it! Thanks for being so kind *S* nicole - u flatter me! its been 3 mins now and i'm still smiling! butthen this is still nothing compared to urs! Thank u and thanks again *huGz* love, michelle If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
its definitely sweet of you to willingly be the girl behind his back and not expect anything in return.... HUGS  |
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