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Watcher
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since 2000-11-23
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0 posted 2000-11-23 08:14 AM


Many times I've sat and watched
As to the Angel others talked
Never once has she complained
When her help others sought

Now in her life it seems to me
That fate has brought her to her knees
And all may soon be destroyed
If someone a helping friend won't be

Standing alone there in silence
She's fought back tears
And so many obstacles overcame
As time keeps passing through the years

I've tried to keep a watch out for her
As she's struggled through much pain
But even when I wasn't there
Never has she once complained

The patience that she shows for others
Far succeeds most I've known
And the love she gives never falters
Never judging those who to her go

While my attempt at poetry here may fail
I'm hoping that her wings it helps to heal
And the Broken Winged Angel will fly again
When with time her wings will mend.

  We're all pulling for you girl.  While you may not understand now what the meaning behind it all is, someday it will fall into place for you. Keep on smiling.

© Copyright 2000 Watcher - All Rights Reserved
kcsgrandma
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since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522
Presque Isle, ME
1 posted 2000-11-23 10:04 AM


This is a lovely tribute to Angel, and a very nice first post.  I'm glad she has someone watching out for her. Welcome to the Pub.

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

DawnG
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2 posted 2000-11-23 12:04 PM


A very lovely tribute.

                                 Dawn

Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
3 posted 2000-11-24 07:26 AM


Beautiful poem, I'm sure she will be pleased with it.
inot2B
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Arkansas
4 posted 2000-11-24 03:37 PM


How sweet a friend you are, and you have penned a beautiful poem.
Marge Tindal
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Florida's Foreverly Shores
5 posted 2000-11-24 07:11 PM


Watcher~
Very thoughtful and caring.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Moon Dust
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6 posted 2000-11-24 07:27 PM


I agree I think this is lovely

Life has got to chnage,
Nothing stays the same,
Soon it will be time,
For me to move on.


Broken_Winged_Angel
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 994
Small Town, Somewhere
7 posted 2001-01-18 10:41 PM


  I've tried to figure out who you are, but my guesses keep missing the mark...Thankyou for your continued support, and I hope that everything keeps going good(?) for you. BWA.

With a little piece of tomorrow,
You'll have to kiss yesterday goodbye.
Because today won't last forever,
And the past will only make you cry.

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