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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA 
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A cold winters morn waking to the afterglow of passions embrace as a deep loves entwining enfolds years of devotion Belief is a truth held in the mind; faith is a fire in the heart. Joseph Fort Newton |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
This one certainly warmed me up, Ellie! To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Ellie, This is sweet and senual, the loving touch of a faithful companion. I Like this Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has passed Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
love the sweet sentiments here....oh, to wake up wrapped in someone else's arms in the morning  |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
mmmmmmmmmmmmmmm!! |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
ohhhhh the title caught my eye. I loved it. Together forever.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
A beautiful way to warm up Winter! This is perhaps your best tanka yet Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Hmmmm What a beautiful way to wake on a cold winters morn. Excellent Ellie! Maree "If my words could blanket the skies and fill every corner and crevice of this earth, still this won't be enough" "Maree Russo" |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Ellie~ Very nice. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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jamesjiao Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 268Backwaters of Avalon |
We need to hold an emergency meeting here! Our heater sales are slipping fast for this winter.. what? Someone has written a poem to warm up the winter? Hire that person, now, no matter the price!!.. - James The beauty of nature is displayed, not through itself, but through the creatures dwelling within its bosom. |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
well, you filled my tank with this tanka!..lol< !signature--> the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost [This message has been edited by pegasus111 (edited 11-27-2000).] |
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