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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. 
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Cold wind has laid siege Whistles tune through leafless trees Song that chills the soul 11-20-2000 |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Brrrrrrr....I know what you mean, Dennis! Lovely poem! Denise |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
Very vivid, as always, Dennis. Makes me cold just to think of it. To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Bro, I'm going back to the fire. I'm sure glad I read that one first. Your crown has a few more precious gems! Love, Sis Belief is a truth held in the mind; faith is a fire in the heart. Joseph Fort Newton |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
and the hits just keep on comming..great read. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
dennis, the moment i read this, all i thought of was "even the hiberating squirrel shivers"...like to provide a sequel to this haiku using my idea?..thanx!  |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
well i tried, dennis...hope you like it!! Freezing Winter Haiku Winds pierce with gusto~ Squirrel reaches for blanket~ Shivering cold still now that i tried, its your turn to add to this thread...LOL |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
well written DEN! i'm freezing now ..lol  and way to go KAILE on that sequel hugs, g |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Thank you for your Kind replies! Sorry for that chill Denise. Marilyn, vivid is good? I thought so! :^) Ellie, You are too KIND, Thanks Pegasus, A HIT? Thanks for your kind comment. Kaile, I like your creative response,write on Bro. DgV, I also wrote Embers Haiku and posted at the same time to balance the temperatures out. Check it out, it'll warm you up. finally a haiku follow up for Kaile, Chilly fingers stretch To hold unsuspecting souls In it's icy grasp Thanks to ALL, Dennis :^) |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
this was chillin......brrrrrr  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Well expressed, I love the last line...so true. Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
wonderful use of personification in that haiku follow-up, dennis.... |
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