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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Caught amongst the dream, Something stange is happening, Butterfly's new wings. Life has got to chnage, Nothing stays the same, Soon it will be time, For me to move on. |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
New heights to travel the butterfly of new life spreads her lovely wings Marie; you have written a most beautiful Senryu! Love Ellie Belief is a truth held in the mind; faith is a fire in the heart. Joseph Fort Newton |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Caterpillar wakes, From metamorphic slumber, Freed from earthbound crawl! Maria, Beautiful image you've captured here! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has passed Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
Fearing to be changed I suddenly discover I have gained my wings! Nice thoughts, Maria! To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Maria~ On this little note A gift to you I will bring You gave a thought wings *Be on the watch for a Fanka-U !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Thank you eveyone specailly for those little haikus Marge - Thank you again, I loved it Life has got to chnage, Nothing stays the same, Soon it will be time, For me to move on. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
ah, the senryu that inspired such a tremendous thought process..*a pat on the back* for a job well done and be sure i will think of something to add to this list of wunnerful haiku |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
thanks kaile Life has got to chnage, Nothing stays the same, Soon it will be time, For me to move on. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
GREAT! Another wonderful one by you!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
And thanks again Life has got to chnage, Nothing stays the same, Soon it will be time, For me to move on. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
a tanka for you  Caterpillar Metamorphosis Tanka Peering bashfully Inviting blue sky beckons Eager to embrace It flapped its new-found freedom Mating as one with the sky thanx for the inspiration |
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