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candid camera query

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

0 posted 2000-11-20 11:45 AM

candid camera query

won’t work
never does
no escape
onto film
not me
standing there
looking at you
caught in a transparency
more like a fish
caught on a line
of words

phoetic poetic memories
of photoed poet
see why
there’s no
reason to see
beyond the words

not what you thought

can we see in the eyes
what lies
in the mind

you didn’t capture my spirit
with this one
nor that one
this is no good
cast this aside

but wait,
look here,
in the old black and white
of the child
that I was
when I was young

when you were
young

but older than I

here, you can spy
on the look in my eye
of the dreams in my soul
all to be fulfilled some day
some way
some how
somewhere
in time

before you came about
before you were known
before you were shown

the poet in me

and now,
what was
your candid
camera query?

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2000-11-20 09:58 PM

sorry folks, a bump to the top in case doreen will see it...she might understand...she is such a kindred spirit...

compassion
Member

since 2000-11-01

Posts 135
USA

2 posted 2000-11-20 10:56 PM

Sunshine,
You have captured the complete picture except to add the kodak moments go beyond lazyly monitoring the poetic words....beyond and beyond and beyond....to insanity only to return to the big screen and see your staring or a side show with moments away from the big screen...how do they do it,at first....shuting this motion picture down now.

pegasus111
Member Elite

since 2000-07-27

Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa

3 posted 2000-11-21 01:29 PM

frozen moments in time can never capture the real person..I doubt that any device can. we are indeed mysterious concoctions that defy description..isn't it delicious?

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost

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