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Sasikat
Member

since 2000-02-02

Posts 290
St. Petersburg, FL

0 posted 2000-02-28 07:48 PM

Through my mind I see
the life we had of past.
Times of love and caring
that weren't meant to last.

I see your image clearly
and the smile you used to wear.
No matter how much time goes by,
I know I'll always care.

I see the times we shared;
the life we had together.
I'll cherish every moment of it
from now until forever.

The years we gave to one another
flew by so terribly fast.
Now our dreams are crystalized
and have become reflections of the past.

Little_Spyro
Senior Member

since 2000-01-09

Posts 659
San Diego, CA, USA

1 posted 2000-02-28 07:52 PM

This is kind of sad, but a great poem nonetheless. You write so well!

Little Spyro T. Dragon

Songbird
Member Elite

since 1999-12-15

Posts 2184
Missouri

2 posted 2000-02-28 08:21 PM

Yes you do, and I will second that!

deleeme
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since 1999-10-09

Posts 1766
NEW ENGLAND, USA

3 posted 2000-02-28 08:57 PM

If we can't keep cherished ones in hand, at least by the wonderful ability of memeory we can keep them in heart and mind. Such can both sadden and soothe. I like your poem friend, care care, David

"Our Creativity points to a Higher Creator--we couldn't have just happened, and for what ability we may possess--to God be the glory." -dlw-

Aimster
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since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

4 posted 2000-02-28 09:00 PM

~sas

this touched my heart! this poem really spoke to me, because i too have some of these familiar memories/thoughts of someone who was once a huge important part of my life. this poem spoke of sadness but also spoke of more. i got the feeling that memories have helped to console you...at least i hope that is the case. they have for me. please take care and keep writing inspiring poetry such as this.
amy

~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

5 posted 2000-02-28 09:29 PM

Sentimental reflections! This is beautiful, Sasikat!

Denise

childomine
Senior Member

since 2000-01-25

Posts 818
st. petersburg, FL

6 posted 2000-02-29 06:05 AM

Good job of writing about one of the worst losses - lost love. You write so well Sasi and I look forward to reading more.

Sheilan
Member

since 2000-02-29

Posts 50
Snohomish, WA

7 posted 2000-02-29 03:16 PM

Haunting....inspiring quite a few bittersweet memories of my own....Beautiful.
Sheilan

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