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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. 
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Caterpillar wakes, From metamorphic slumber, Freed from earthbound crawl! (This poem was inspired by Maria Byrnes' "Change Senryu") [This message has been edited by Dennis L. White (edited 11-18-2000).] |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Wings of hope then spread wakened to Springs wondrous joy freedom beauties flight Aw, Dennis you set me up for this one.! Your Haiku was too lovely a temptation! Love, Sis Belief is a truth held in the mind; faith is a fire in the heart. Joseph Fort Newton |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
Waiting for new day Freedom never dreamed about Arrives with the dawn. I'm glad you posted this separately, Dennis. I love it! To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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monique Member
since 2000-02-03
Posts 369Louisiana |
And then it was hit By an orange Cadillac On its way to hell |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
very nice, you just summed up a life process within 17 syllables  |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Nice one Dennis..........I've run out of expletives for you stuff....... Jon |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Great.......a new beginning!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
I absolutely love this one - the theme, the expression, it's one of your best! You just have the magic touch when it comes to haikus/senryus/tankas Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Dennis, What a great job you've done, I like it "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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