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ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10

Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA

0 posted 2000-11-16 07:44 AM

Tis a cold fall day
spiders have come to visit
bringing gifts of silk

Gossamer threads form
intricate woven designs
decorate this house

Belief is a truth held in the mind; faith is a fire in the heart.

Joseph Fort Newton

Dennis L. White
Senior Member

since 2000-02-17

Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.

1 posted 2000-11-16 09:01 AM

Uninvited guest
Weave excuses in fine silk
To amuse the host!

Good one Ellie!
Dennis :^)

Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has passed
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)

BSC

Moderator

Member Elite

since 2000-02-04

Posts 2919
New York, USA

2 posted 2000-11-16 10:08 AM

eeeeewwwwwwww got goosebumps Ellie, spiders and I just DON'T get along....love the haiku though. Bonnie

Hostess gets out broom
Sweeps away delicate thread
Arachnid moves on!

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

3 posted 2000-11-16 11:30 AM

what a delightfully different way at looking at spiders!!!

i must say i enjoy staring at those silken masterpieces a lot too

Jon Mewett
Senior Member

since 2000-03-04

Posts 1304

4 posted 2000-11-16 12:09 PM

You have got to treat any thing with that many legs with caution........just kidding

Jon

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

5 posted 2000-11-16 03:21 PM

A great way to look at spiders, and a great poem!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

6 posted 2000-11-16 03:50 PM

ellie-

         silken web of tales
    freely spun to share with all
          black widow poet

              -vlraynes


    always enjoy your wonderful
    haikus, my friend.

    hugs,
    -vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

7 posted 2000-11-16 03:50 PM

Ellie~

Empty spider webs ?
This will ruin the neighborhood !
Hang out FOR SALE sign.

Good show, Ellie~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

Moon Dust

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since 1999-06-11

Posts 2177
Skelmersdale, UK

8 posted 2000-11-16 08:26 PM

Dust laden silk threads,
Dust away old silken dreams,
For new masterpiece,

Life has got to chnage,
Nothing stays the same,
Soon it will be time,
For me to move on.

kcsgrandma
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since 2000-09-24

Posts 1522
Presque Isle, ME

9 posted 2000-11-16 11:54 PM

Pretty silken threads,
If they could be wash and wear,
Would make new wardrobe.

Like many uninvited guests, these are not entirely welcome, but your writing is most welcome!

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

pegasus111
Member Elite

since 2000-07-27

Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa

10 posted 2000-11-17 10:48 PM

ahhh... an arachnid tale of threads, and webs. come into my parlor said....... well you know.

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost

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