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Poker Night at Sasquatch's!! |
Solstice Son Member
since 2000-09-19
Posts 469 |
..Ok..I will start puttin the "serious" poems out after this one....*L* Sol " Its poker night at Sasquatch's" The Easter Bunny said to me... " Cept we're meetin at the Tooth Fairy's, Cause Squatch's cat has got the fleas!" So I packed me up some munchies choc covered pretzels, and veggies a case of caff-free Mt.Dew and all the change that I could see. I usually break even when I play mythology but on the rare occasion all the change goes home with me. Rabbit, Squatch and Dental Fae, and a new face did I see, her eyes her lips and shrouded hips took my breath, a bit, from me. 'Its a pleasure to meet you ' said I with outward hand, " Just call me Queenie, just for now." she said and shook my hand. Round the green felt went the cards dimes, nickels, and pennies and every time I looked up Queenie's smile did I see The Rabbit he was in the hole, Bigfoot scratching at some fleas T.F. trading crowns for change The Queen, broke even, just like me. But now my cards were changing as the face cards I did see The Ace, the King, the Jack and Ten of the suits of Hearts I see " How many You?" called the Rabbit. " Just one for me is fine." "As long as its the right One" said Queenie and uped the pot a dime. I met her winsome gaze and folded then and there she gathered up the kitty having won with just a pair. It was 3 am and I was tired so was the Dental Fae Squatch just lay there snoring Rabbit in the hole to stay. I walked Queenie to the door. waved g'bye to all asleep and strolling down to my car with Queenie I did speak. " Thanks for playing, it was fun I'm really glad you came." 'So am I hun, truely it's quite a thrilling game.' We were standing by my car " Um...are you riding home with me?" She smiled and then she hopped inside just as cozy as could be. I sat down. Buckled in and she put a finger to my lips... " Well....I am the One you want... the Queen of Hearts and poker chips..." |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
The title drew me in and the poem kept me.. very cute!! I loved it. |
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bestgirl911 Senior Member
since 2000-10-04
Posts 551Clio, MI , United We Stand |
As always very unique and kept me holding out till the very end...(((Hugs)))) Best |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I thought this was the cutest! I loved it! A very creative poem! Keep them rolling in...... i like your "not serious" poems. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
nice one Sometimes you have to let go and move on, But never let go of the memories. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very creative! I enjoyed this very much! Denise |
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Romy Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170Plantation, Florida |
This is a very fun and clever poem! I really enjoyed it! Good Job! |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Sol; Great read~ Fun poem, don't get too serious on us cause you;re very good at this! Belief is a truth held in the mind; faith is a fire in the heart. Joseph Fort Newton |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
That was fun......we need more fun Jon |
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Solstice Son Member
since 2000-09-19
Posts 469 |
Oh my....thank you everybody...*L*...Hm..more fun...I will see what I can do...*L* and I shall save the serious tuff for another time *G*...love ya all.. Sol |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Solstice Son, Delightful read, 'fraid i'm catching up, read the laundramat one first, You've got my attention......Write On! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has passed Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Yo Solstice... Nothing like drawing into a straight flush, royal... and with nothing less than the Queen. I'd say your's is a winning hand and so is your poem. Thanks for the read... enjoyed the fun. Peace! |
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Solstice Son Member
since 2000-09-19
Posts 469 |
*L* Thanks Dennis, Andrew...everyone really...this was a bit of nonsense that has made a lot of peeps happy...glad it worked out that way Sol |
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