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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2000-11-05 03:32 AM



Upsy Down Daisy
~*Marge Tindal*~


Soft surrender of morning
Upsy-down daisy's delight
Loves me - Loves me not
fallen petals of the fading night

Dreams given up
to the rising of the sun
Upsy-down daisy
the day has begun

Taking of the morning
with a handful of sunbeams
Upsy-down daisies now gathered
heading back to my dreams

Loves
me

Loves me
not

Loves me






~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Alle'cram
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1 posted 2000-11-05 03:54 AM


lovely in every way and with this thought in mind think I'll say nite...nite Marge  
Very sweet and sweet.  Marcy

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2 posted 2000-11-05 04:00 AM


Marcy~
Nite, my friend ...
May you gather daisies on the morrow !
Love n' hugs
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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ellie LeJeune
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3 posted 2000-11-05 08:05 AM


Marge; this is a sweet littly child's whimsical song of summer. So enchanting! I love it! Love, Ellie

le coeur a ses raisons que la raison ne con-nait point....the heart has its reasons that reason knows nothing of..



vlraynes
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4 posted 2000-11-05 12:31 PM



Marge-
   this is precious.  
   ...so sweet and lovely.  
   i just love it.  

   lol...i've gotta tell you though...
   this reminded me of an old
   Doris Day song..'Don't Eat The Daisies'  
   yes...it's true...i'm a sucker for
   those old Doris Day songs...lol.
   oh well...que sera sera...lol.  

   love ya,
   -vicky




"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



JOY 14
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5 posted 2000-11-05 01:27 PM


Upsy Down Daisy.  I like this, Marge. What a wonderful image I got from this. Daisy petals everywhere! what to do, what to do.  

~Have a great day~

Joy

Denise
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6 posted 2000-11-05 02:18 PM


This is lovely, Marge!

Denise

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7 posted 2000-11-05 03:31 PM


I thought this was great. It sucked me right in and i was loving every moment of it!



"I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust."

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!

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8 posted 2000-11-05 04:21 PM


Ellie~
I am so glad you enjoyed it.

Vicky~
Oh, yes !  
Even Doris would like this Sentimental Journey !
Thanks for the smile.

Joy~
I'm please to know you liked it.

Denise~
Thank ye !

Dopey~
Glad you liked it.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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PhaerieChild
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9 posted 2000-11-05 05:15 PM


Marge...this brought a smile to an otherwise melancholy day. Thanks for a little sunshine and a daisy.

How can you save me?
When the dark comes right in and takes me,
from my front walk and into bed,
where it kisses my face and eats my head. Shivaree

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10 posted 2000-11-05 08:20 PM


WildChild~

I'm glad to have shared a smile with you.
A little sunshine - a bright little daisy
it's the least that I could do.

Hope the smile settles and stays
lifting you out of a melancholy day.
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~


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11 posted 2000-11-06 12:13 PM


Definitely loves you, I think, Marge.  Who could not?  

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

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12 posted 2000-11-06 03:44 AM


KCS~
Awwww !  Thank you.
This one just fell to the page
from somewhere out of the meadow full of daisy's.
I'm glad you enjoyed it.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Alle'cram
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13 posted 2000-11-06 03:50 AM


What a treat, little daisy on top as I start to sleep! nite Marge,   Love, Marcy
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14 posted 2000-11-06 04:41 AM


I love Daisies .....specialy Daisie chains...Nice

Jon

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15 posted 2000-11-06 07:02 AM


Marge- I, too loved the daisies, hope you don't mind I copied them to save in my folder for future webpage use...they were beautiful.

~Wynter


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



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16 posted 2000-11-06 07:47 AM


Marcy~
I hope you dreamed in a field of daisies !  

Jon~
Me too !  Thanks.  

Wynter~
Glad you liked.  
Shucks, I don't mind at all ...
I snitched 'em off the Net somewhere myself !  
~*Marge*~

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Romy
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17 posted 2000-11-06 02:28 PM


Marge you are so amazing! I love the topics that you come up with for your poetry!  I don't know how you do it, but your talent is impressive!
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18 posted 2000-11-06 02:35 PM


Debbie~
Thank you sooooo much ...
I'm not always sure where they come from either ...
Mostly it seems that a little muse whispers in my ear
and then impatiently taps her little foot
until I make the time to pen it.
I sure do appreciate your comments.
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~



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19 posted 2000-11-07 12:54 PM


Thanks for the smile, Marge...I guess you know I needed it.  Hugs!
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20 posted 2000-11-07 01:07 AM


Martie~
I think I did know ...
but, friends are like that, aren't we ?
BIG OLE BEAR HUGS from this Upsy Daisy gal !
~*Marge*~


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21 posted 2000-11-07 09:17 AM


What sweet images this brings to mind Marge, will think of this tonight and fall asleep with a smile.  Beautiful!!!  Bonnie
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22 posted 2000-11-07 09:20 PM


Bonnie~
Thank you, lady.
I don't know why I like this little thing so much myself ...
but I get a little grin every time I read it.
If I figure it out ... I'll let you know.
I'm smiling too.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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