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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa 
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Thou hast wept bitter tears in dark places, even unto thou, vile demons have torn thy flesh, tortured thee with the uncertainty of thy worth, evil thought doth crawl in the slime of despair, drawing thou deeper into the pain of thyself, thy noiseless screams into the blackness, unheard, unheeded, by the enemy of truth, lies of faceless antagonists deny thee hope, turn thy face upward, away from thy fear, seek sanctuary in a power beyond thy scope, for even from this blackest of all pits, foul with the stench of deceived hearts, suffocating with the mass of agonized humanity, thy spirit shall rise again out of the darkness, into the saving light to be reborn again, for thy spirit is immortal unto eternity the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This starts out so dark then with the quick of a blink, goes into the light, quote: and leaves one with unmeasurable hope... well done! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Pegasus, You have described the dispair and anguish of a tormented soul, but have also pointed to where our hope and release from such misery comes from. Wonderful contrast! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has passed Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Oh wow Pegasus from the bitter depths to the doorstep of hope, this is a great read!! Bonnie |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
Sunshine, Dennis, BSC, thank you for your support..sometimes I get a little gothic but, it seems to turn out well.  the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Solstice Son Member
since 2000-09-19
Posts 469 |
ooh la la...i like...very very nice...*G* and aye...it does have a bit of the gothic feel to it...but just like the old stained glassed windows in those stone cathedrals...your words let in the light... well done indeed... Sol |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Pegasus: You have captured the anquished soul in the depths of despair and, as we all know, it is only from our worst bottom, that we all finally give up the battle and reach for God, Who has been lovinglt waiting, to draw us into His marvelous Light of Love. This is exquisite!!!!!!!!!! Ellie le coeur a ses raisons que la raison ne con-nait point....the heart has its reasons that reason knows nothing of.. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very well written, Pegasus! Denise |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
Solstice Son, Denice, Ellie..thanks for your warm comments. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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a_little_girl Member
since 2000-05-08
Posts 307San Alejandro, HI, USA |
True....our souls are immortal, its the flesh thats mortal. Our souls live forever as long as the memory of us lives on in those that love us. --Little Girl |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
Little Girl..thank you for the read.. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Gothic is nice.......great tension in this.....I could see the rebirth as I read....Yikes(((((()))))))spooky. Jon |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
turn thy face upward, away from thy fear, seek sanctuary in a power beyond thy scope, for even from this blackest of all pits, foul with the stench of deceived hearts, suffocating with the mass of agonized humanity, thy spirit shall rise again out of the darkness, into the saving light to be reborn again, for thy spirit is immortal unto eternity WOW..just wow ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Very good write, Peg, Truth if I've ever heard it! Good one. Love, Marcy |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
thanks Jon..praise from you is well received Wynter..you are very kind..thank you. Marcy..thanks for the compliment dear.. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Romy Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170Plantation, Florida |
I really liked this! I think this is a beautifully written message of hope and encouragement for any who feel despair! |
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Romy Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170Plantation, Florida |
oops! well, again, excellent writing! [This message has been edited by Debbie (edited 11-06-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Pegasus~ 'thy spirit shall rise again out of the darkness' 'for thy spirit is immortal unto eternity What truths have touched this piece. Quite well done. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
"Thou hast wept bitter tears in dark places" "thy spirit shall rise again out of the darkness" Wow...I took your words and hunted this poem down to read....Those two lines really jump out at me..The whole thing hits me hard, but those two ...*remains speechless*  Thankyou, Pegasus...Thankyou very much! |
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