»
Archives
»
The Corner Pub
»
God,Tea,Poetry, and me.....
| The Corner Pub |
|
God,Tea,Poetry, and me..... |
|
|
Solstice Son Member
since 2000-09-19
Posts 469 |
this is for BWA...for similar taste in tea for Bestgirl911 and Lady Noggins....who weather they kow it or not...helped craft the images in my mind... and especially for Rebecca...whose way with words is so opposite of mine....which at times...has made me laugh....and cry...wondering what exactly she's feeling.... Sol  The God of Poetry and I sat to chit-chat for a while see, I longed for cheap improvement, thought I'd mooch off of His style " So how do you like this world of Mine?" was His question posed to me and after a sip of honeyed mint, I let my tongue run free I talked of rings, and secret things and barbed wire birdies in the sky He sat in place, and watched my face and would smile once in a while I talked of love, of friend and foe prattled on 'bout dark and light of how the sky mates with the sea beneath a sunset bright I rhymed and chanted, omn and on of every colored hue, of time and space, and cruel two-faced people that I 'knew' Endless I narrated the coming of the dawn and how the dew on spider's web held the captive wide-eyed fawn And when , at last, my words were gone and the tea and cookies too with smiling face, and a touch of grace He said " Thanks, I like it too." |
||
| © Copyright 2000 Adam M.M. Stevanovic' - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
I rhymed and chanted, omn and on of every colored hue, of time and space, and cruel two-faced people that I 'knew' I like that verse so much....very very nice sol Jon |
||
|
ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Oh, Wow! I love this enchanting poem! This is just pure delight and so winsome. Terrific job. Ellie le coeur a ses raisons que la raison ne con-nait point....the heart has its reasons that reason knows nothing of.. |
||
|
pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
this was a great read..thanks for sharing. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
||
|
Solstice Son Member
since 2000-09-19
Posts 469 |
Jon, thanks for reading...i think what I like best about the poem is that while the guy is sitting there, blathering away...God eats all the cookies *L* Ellie...thank you very much...God's line at the end....was all my wife had to say about a movie we had both seen..i had talked for a good long while about everything I liked about the movie...*L* she liked it too... Sol |
||
|
Solstice Son Member
since 2000-09-19
Posts 469 |
Peg, you are more than welcome...I am just pleased there is someplce to do this...I have neither the time nor energy to find a nice " pub " of my own...that and I don't think most peeps in a bar would enjoy anything that doesn't rhyme with 'beer '...well at least in the midwest anyway *L* Sol |
||
|
bestgirl911 Senior Member
since 2000-10-04
Posts 551Clio, MI , United We Stand |
I am speechless.(enjoy it while you can..lol) You have such a big heart and every day you make me glad I came to see the images you so eloquently create. Thank you. |
||
|
Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
SS, I talked of love, of friend and foe prattled on 'bout dark and light of how the sky mates with the sea beneath a sunset bright This is beautiful! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has passed Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
||
|
Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This almost had the style of a ballad, I really enjoyed this one. "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."" Laurie Lee Kathleen |
||
Dopey Dope
Moderator
Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I liked the topic of this poem. I thought it was a very creative poem and a much appreciated read.  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
||
|
Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I loved this! Fantastic writing! Denise |
||
|
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thanks, I liked it, too.  ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
||
|
Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
This one is so good, I love the flow of it, great work "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
||
|
Suzanne Arlene Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 377Ontario, Canada |
That is such a neat thought God sitting beside you and you spend tea together.chit chat lol neat concept. Suzanne |
||
Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SolticeSon~ This is just wonderful ! The easy chit chat with God is an awesome concept. 'Thanks,I like it too !' MARVELOUS ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
||
|
Romy Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170Plantation, Florida |
Everything about this poem is perfect! I loved the rhythm, it flows so nicely and the ending was fabulous! |
||
|
Solstice Son Member
since 2000-09-19
Posts 469 |
Oh my..* blushes and smiles profusly * (is that spelled correctly??) Um..I am extremely pleased that the bit of rhyme and sillyness has touched everyone in such a way...I am glad now that I stopped working ( I am a meter reader for the power company ) and wrote this down... You are all such sincerely nice people... I am glad to share with all of you... Sol |
||
|
Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
This is the most refreshing read I have had the pleasure to partake of for a long time. Love it! KThe wind shifts like this: Like a human without illusions... This is how the wind shifts: Like a human, heavy and heavy, Who does not care. W.S |
||
|
Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
A wonderful poem I am enchanted Liz |
||
|
Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Solstice, it sure was a real pleasure to read you Thanks K for directing me to this, yes, refreshing poem enjoyed it ver much "If my words could blanket the skies and fill every corner and crevice of this earth, still this won't be enough" "Maree Russo" |
||
|
Solstice Son Member
since 2000-09-19
Posts 469 |
Thank you ...I am quite taken aback by all the praise, but am so very happy that it has made your day a bit better...eekers...now I feel the need to keep up the standard..*LOL* again..Thank you all very much... Sol |
||
|
Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
SS, I enjoyed your poem very much, I can see that in my absence from Passions I have missed some great talent. Glad you came to join us here, and thanks for enlightening us with your poetry |
||
|
Solstice Son Member
since 2000-09-19
Posts 469 |
Lost Dreamer....thank you...I don't really deserve such praise..but thank you nonetheless.... Sol |
||
|
kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
This is truly an enjoyable read, Sol. I can imagine God's reacting in just such a way as we prattle on about what He already knows. I'd like to have been sitting at that table listening. To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
||
|
kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
I liked this too Hugs |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
