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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Leaves like moistened tears Are falling from the trees Alone with all my fears Can you help me please? The misty swollen morning Alighting on my eyes My sadden soul a borning My love for her just cries Rivers of reflection Come flooding through my head She is sweet perfection All the things she’s said Her scent is lingering longing Upon my collars white I know that I’m belonging Beside her now….. tonight Her sparkling pools of quietness Are burned inside my brain An angel is her likeness I’ll catch the midnight train If I could take her essence Distil it in my hand I’d always have her presence Wherever I may land Like a speeding bullets aim The arrows flying true When in my life you came My heart was sealed for you ……………………………………. A flame of thoughts desire Is racing from this place Her memory fuels the fire But I still miss her face Jon Mewett [This message has been edited by Jon Mewett (edited 11-02-2000).] |
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bestgirl911 Senior Member
since 2000-10-04
Posts 551Clio, MI , United We Stand |
Jon...This is wonderful...Sad...but so lovely... Best |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
I really like this one Jon..I can feel the ache..well done. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Jon~ Sad longings of the heart, yet it is better to have loved, than never to have loved at all. And there is that never ending rainbow ya know. Deb  |
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DawnG 
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Great job Jon. I liked this a lot. Dawn |
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a_little_girl Member
since 2000-05-08
Posts 307San Alejandro, HI, USA |
*sniff**sniff* This is so sad Jon. But I need to know one thing, how DO you do it so well?  --Little Girl |
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nicolette Junior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 42St. Paul, Minnesota |
Jon, I really enjoyed reading this. Very sad, but very well written. Thanks...Nik |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Thanx everybody you are very kind here........when I'm away from home I just get hopelessly sad......but it makes coming back nice Thanx Jon |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
JON, this is a jewel... Thank you for a superb read today Coco |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Bullets eh? makes a change from arrows But a very lovely write all the same. Sometimes you have to let go and move on, But never let go of the memories. |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
 Jon, Well, your sadness is sad but it seems to bring out the best of romantic poetry from you. Magical indeed. Marcy |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Jon this is so beautiful! May we include this in the upcoming Valetine Issue of the newsletter?  |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautifully done, Jon! Denise |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Xcellent writing, Jon ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Thanx to the warmth of this place I aint sad no more....... Jon |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Quite sad, but nonetheless a wonderful piece. Glad to hear you're not sad any longer.  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Sings like a song - well done! Christopher |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
If I could take her essence Distil it in my hand I’d always have her presence Wherever I may land had to read again, I enjoyed it so much the first time ~Wynter * I like the use of distil...methinks I have a poem inspired in me "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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