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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Our love was warm as the sun Our love was endless as the sea Our love was brilliant as a shooting star Our love was soothing to my soul Our love was music to my ears Our love was spectacular like a rainbow Our love was filled with tender moments Our love was sent from the heavens Our love was magnificent in its time ---------------------------------------------------- Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LoneWolf~ How very, very lovely. 'Our love was magnificent in its time' To have known that love and recognize it's significance is awesome. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
What a lovely remembrance..  Well done. |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Oh what a beautiful love you have know LW, and you have written of it in such a lovely way. Bonnie |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Beautiful work here. Some lady is very lucky to have found you. Dawn |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful reflections! Denise |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
yes it is very sad. And I have been there. It's just so beauiful the way you wrote it, mind if I keep this one  Sometimes you have to let go and move on, But never let go of the memories. |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
LW - sad yes... the repetition is well done - kind of slams home the repetitive feeling of... pain. Chris |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
that you had the courage to love at at all is worth the pain, I pray love comes again and lasts a lifetime. Ellie le coeur a ses raisons que la raison ne con-nait point....the heart has its reasons that reason knows nothing of.. |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
A wonderful piece my friend! "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Rainbow spectacular, a beautiful description of love, Lone Wolf. In it's time, a beautiful love ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Marge . . . Hi there! Yes it was ver significant and I consider myself lucky to have known such a love. *HUGS* Thanks my friend. BWA . . .Thank you! Bonnie . . . In its time it was the most beautiful thing I ever knew. Too bad I did not realize that sooner. Thanks. Callie . . . LOL, well I am a lady!! I was the lucky one who once found a wonderful man who loved me more than anything, but I blew it with him. So this love is past tense for me. thanks for reading. Denise . . . Thanks! Maria . . . So sorry you relate to this and have been there. It is sad, but some of the memories are awesome. Yes, you may keep it! I'd be honored. Chris . . . I agree, sad for sure. But you know not all of it was bad. I guess I am trying to look back and see what once was before the pain. Trying to get past that. Not easy, but I have to try. Thanks for reading. Ellie . . . Yes, loving takes a lot of courage and to love again will take even more for me. Thank you so much for the wishes my friend. EagleOne . . . Thanks so much my friend. Wynter . . .In its time is was beautiful and all love should be. Thank you for reading. Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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epoet Member
since 2000-05-11
Posts 291grand rapid,MI, usa |
hey LW, great feeling in this. The way its written really drives this home. What a sad tribute to love lost. Hope things are better now. ***HUGSS**** P. J. Kotrch carpe diem A soul once touched is a soul once blessed by love |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Wow! What special love. Great poem! Deb |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
To have known love like this is not something everybody experiences in life. Great poem ! |
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a_little_girl Member
since 2000-05-08
Posts 307San Alejandro, HI, USA |
Well done, there are plenty of metaphors used here. I like the way you use imagery to show us what you mean. --Little Girl |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Beautiful memories LoneWolf, soon, I hope you can write this again in the present tense. Love ya! Marcy |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
epoet . . . Thank you, my friend. **HUGS** to you. Things are okay here. Deb . . . It was very special. Thanks. Munda . . . I feel fortunate for having known such a love. You are so right. Little Girl . . . Thank for reading and welcome to Passions!! I am glad the message came through to you.Marcy . . . I will treasure them always, no matter what. Thank you so much my friend. Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Ah a bitter sweet piece. Great expression LW. May you always treasure your memories. ~Sheri "The things that come to those that wait may be the things left by those who got there first" |
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