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bestgirl911 Senior Member
since 2000-10-04
Posts 551Clio, MI , United We Stand |
It creeps up on us, When no one is around, Makes it's home inside our heart, Without the slightest sound. It picks us up, It brings us down, It makes us cry, Without the slightest sound. It makes us silly, Just like a clown, It makes us giggle, Without the slightest sound. It makes us feel like royalty, Like we should wear a crown, A kingdom just for lovers, Without the slightest sound. It light's up our eyes, It wipes away a frown, It's what makes me love you, Without the slightest sound. |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
I like this a lot......it's very true things like love do creep up on you when your not looking.....that's the fun. nice writing Jon  |
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Solstice Son Member
since 2000-09-19
Posts 469 |
ooooh!! I like ....makes me sit and think..*L* I know I know..that's very dangerous, but still...how much am I missing waiting to hear something??..very nice m'dear...very nice indeed... sol |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
this is lovely..very well done bestgirl. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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bestgirl911 Senior Member
since 2000-10-04
Posts 551Clio, MI , United We Stand |
Jon... They have a way of doing that don't they?..lol Sol.... I think it's always right in front of us... But we always look past it..because it's who we least expect....I'm still waiting for it to creep up on me...lol. Glad you enjoyed it. Pegasus... Thank you for the kind comment. Best |
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