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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania 
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Only When You were the one who came to me Defined your thoughts exquisitely With head layed soft upon your chest You comforted my heart’s unrest You lifted me to heights above The common attributes of love You let the sun shine on my face You let your words touch and embrace You looked below the outer sheen And saw what no one else had seen Below the face, beneath the skin You found a beauty deep within Only when the storm had past When I had found some peace at last And true contentment on my face Did you then take me in embrace Elizabeth Santos |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Ah, Liz; Exquisitely lovely poem of hearts true love and tenderness. Sigh! Love, Ellie le coeur a ses raisons que la raison ne con-nait point....the heart has its reasons that reason knows nothing of.. |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Liz, Wonderfully beautiful Liz, I am happy for you. You speak here of total love between two souls. Liz this is just wow can not find a perfect word just know I loved it. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
And still you bring soft smiles to my face - a lot of pressure I know, but please don't stop! Chris |
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bestgirl911 Senior Member
since 2000-10-04
Posts 551Clio, MI , United We Stand |
True love exquisitely expressed.... Best |
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Solstice Son Member
since 2000-09-19
Posts 469 |
beautiful....sent me back in time...thank you m'dear.. Sol  |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Elizabeth~ You touch these tender moments so gently. A beautiful write, my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Yes, very tender, very beautiful, Elizabeth! Lovely! Denise |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
This is so beautiful and tender, a perfect expression of love! There are no words to add to what has already been said. To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
You expressed such a tender love. Left me with a warm feeling. Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
You looked below the outer sheen And saw what no one else had seen Below the face, beneath the skin You found a beauty deep within I really love that.......this is great writing...... Jon |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Thank you all so very much for your kind comments. You warm my heart Liz |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Dear sweet Liz, how you touched with this one. Take care. Marcy |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
I'm glad that I stumbled over here to find this one. Like a fine wine, this deserves to be savoured over time. "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Elizabeth, a lovely write indeed! Coco |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
You looked below the outer sheen And saw what no one else had seen Below the face, beneath the skin You found a beauty deep within Beautiful words, Elizabeth. ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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