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Xeonox
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0 posted 2000-10-30 01:46 AM


Channel through me to find the ultimate time,
The journey will be a little sour like a lions lime,
As you travel on further you sense the chime,
Doesn’t it seem like someone dropped a thousand dimes?
Don’t be tempted to jump in,
It is filled with brine,
For a minute you thought it was whine,
Don’t bring a light for it will not shine,
Just follow the unwinding straight line,
You reached the end,
Why must you decline?
You knew you were involved in a crime,
When you decided to pursue the ever-running time.



Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.)



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1 posted 2000-10-30 02:34 AM


Hmm...I don't think I got out of this, what you meant to portray..But I like it.  
Xeonox
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2 posted 2000-10-30 05:50 PM


I meant a person purusing time that is always changing and always on the move.  

Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.)



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3 posted 2000-10-30 08:47 PM


Well in that case sounds like me

Sometimes you have to let go and move on,
But never let go of the memories.


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