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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Waving quietly from my door I bid you farewell Godspeed. You hurry off in pursuit of life Seeking what you say you need “Take care!” I whispered in your ear I love you, I could not say And thus, you left to find yourself On this cold, November day. Winter’s chill is nothing to me I’ve a coldness deep inside Never will I feel that warmth Because today, I know you lied. You left to be with her again Though you could not say it to me This time I won’t leave on the light The darkness shall set me free Silence holds back my tears But into my heart they will surely fall Saying goodbye for the last time For good, once and for all. |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
OH MY GOODNESS!!! I am speechless!!! WOW!! Amazing usage of words/meanings. This poem is breathtakingly Powerful!! Excellent write-great read! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
PoetdeVine~ Gosh ... this one hurts. 'Silence holds back my tears But into my heart they will surely fall Saying goodbye for the last time For good, once and for all.' Quite a good write, poetess. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Powerful is definatly the word. So sad too. Sometimes you have to let go and move on, But never let go of the memories. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very sad poem, Sharon. Well expressed. Denise |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
*sigh* I think that's all I can say. . . ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
I'm sorry you are hurting. |
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bestgirl911 Senior Member
since 2000-10-04
Posts 551Clio, MI , United We Stand |
I know how this one feels...and you express it well. Best |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
This is heart-breaking, and very beautifully done. To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Sharon - you sure know how to pull the strings of my emotions. With one poem you'll bring smiles, with another a sigh. With this one, you evoked tears. *sigh* This poem breathes loss lady. Very well done. C |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
*low whistle* Dang...You do play our emotions well through your written words...All I can say here is...OUCH! Very well done.. BWA ..  With a little piece of tomorrow, You'll have to kiss yesterday goodbye. Because today won't last forever, And the past will only make you cry. |
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kid D Member
since 2000-10-18
Posts 64 |
powerful, very very powerful, sometimes what's inside speaks louder than what is outside, you spoke this wonderfully |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Again, this suits my mood...you truly painted an emotional scene with this one... sigh...think I need a beer... |
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