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Brian
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since 2000-10-21
Posts 3
Cortland, NY

0 posted 2000-10-29 01:47 AM



Self Doubt

Two roads,wow.
A half chance
for better things.
To seize the day;
Sail on wind.
Simple really,
Please don't fear.
Hold my hand,
I'll bring you here;
To this path
Less traveled.
Is where we walk
A good place to go?
Walk now with me,
Then we'll know.


(Thanks of course to R.Frost)



© Copyright 2000 Brian - All Rights Reserved
ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
1 posted 2000-10-29 08:29 AM


Brian: Wonderful! Life only fully happens on the road less traveled!  Ellie

le coeur a ses raisons que la raison ne con-nait point....the heart has its reasons that reason knows nothing of..



Dennis L. White
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since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.
2 posted 2000-10-29 11:30 AM


Brian,
  Life is a series of decisions, some good, some bad, but all ours to make! I like your thoughtful poem.
Dennis :^)

Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has passed
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)



kcsgrandma
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since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522
Presque Isle, ME
3 posted 2000-10-29 01:48 PM


That Frost poem has always been a favorite of mine.  You do a nice job with your own spin on it.  It should be remembered that two different paths don't necessarily mean that one is better and one is worse, just different ways of getting to the same place. Hope you find joy on yours.

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

pegasus111
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since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa
4 posted 2000-10-29 02:38 PM


this is wonderful..you're talking about my idol folks..very nice read.

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost


Denise
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5 posted 2000-10-29 04:41 PM


Very nice, Brian!

Denise

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