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wordancer
Senior Member

since 2000-07-30

Posts 809
VA

0 posted 2000-10-27 03:24 PM

exhale...

...interlude
a moment in time
between
the beginning...the end
hanging still
...gone
interlude
a question comes to mind
this moment of ours
was it the beginning of the end
or the end of a beginning
or the middle of journey
that has no memory
of previous stops
only to meet
to lose again
till we see again
in another time
in time, or
was this the last
of our mingled pasts
interlude
perhaps this time
in time
was a gross mistake
a spatial hiccup
the cosmic goof
not meant to be
do the gods laugh?
at our supposed destinies
our stealing of moments
of seeing
what could be
was to be
never to be
Should I/we be happy
that we enjoyed
an interlude
or curse the passion
of what can not be
for we are out of
time
in time
accidental interlude
a moment lost
found
lost
found
lost
found
lost
found
lost...

...inhale

Lady Noggins
aka Wordancer

...come, dance with me...in my world of words...

dgvarner
Member Elite

since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

1 posted 2000-10-27 04:20 PM

i love this so, so much!! i love the way its sporatic and sparce in spaces...and telling in other places...

(this one seems rather familiar..did i read it somewhere else b4??)

love it! hugs, dg

"after a while, you learn the subtle difference between holding a hand and chaining a soul..." -V A Shoffstall

bestgirl911
Senior Member

since 2000-10-04

Posts 551
Clio, MI , United We Stand

2 posted 2000-10-27 04:33 PM

Beautiful...and I am still hoping it won't be the last....well, a girl can hope can't she?

all the best Lady!

Best

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

3 posted 2000-10-27 04:44 PM

Lady-
   wow!!  i just absolutely love this.
   i felt this all the way through...
   had me hanging on every word.
   awesome write, my friend.

   hugs,
   -vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes

kcsgrandma
Senior Member

since 2000-09-24

Posts 1522
Presque Isle, ME

4 posted 2000-10-27 11:01 PM

This is beautiful, Lady. So many unanswered questions! Hope you make it back here sometime.

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

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