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Tramp Poet
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since 2000-01-06
Posts 754
Could Be Anywhere...

0 posted 2000-10-24 06:38 AM


Over?

A fish  named Bass
inna pond named Pool.
A day named Time
anna fool named Fool.

A fish named Trout
inna creek named Wet.
A time named Day
anna jet named Jet.

A fish named Squid
inna sea named Deep.
Whoever named What
a trick named Treat?

A fish named Gold
inna bowl named Earth.
Babe named Babe
anna tree named Birch.

A fish named Fish
anna name named Name.
Round named Round
inna game named Game.

A fish named Bass
anna pool named Cool.
A poem named Over
inna pond named Pool.




bleeding...

"Tis ink coming
from his arm,
Captain!"


© Copyright 2000 Daniel James Burt - All Rights Reserved
Solstice Son
Member
since 2000-09-19
Posts 469

1 posted 2000-10-24 08:57 AM


I love it!! I think the next time I start having a day like that, I am gonna pull this out and start chanting it whereever i happen to be!! Kudos!

Sol  

Alle'cram
Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816
Texas
2 posted 2000-10-24 12:51 PM


A friend named Dan
inna a place called Pub
A mood named Cool
anna poem called Silly



dena*mystrawberries
Junior Member
since 2000-10-15
Posts 15

3 posted 2000-10-25 02:33 AM


lol....maybe had a bit too much from that bottle tonight...wish i was there, bleeding..
Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley
4 posted 2000-10-25 08:41 PM


Maybe be silly but is sure is clever!!!  
Tramp Poet
Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 754
Could Be Anywhere...
5 posted 2000-10-26 11:17 AM


thanks all for the replies...
told ya it was silly...


bleeding...

"Tis ink coming
from his arm,
Captain!"


blackhalo
Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467
Denver, CO
6 posted 2000-10-26 12:31 PM


Dan,
I will be the first to say, at least I am not the only one with too much time on my hands!  LOL!!  :b
Alicia

kid D
Member
since 2000-10-18
Posts 64

7 posted 2000-10-26 02:37 PM


lol it might be silly, but then what's wrong with silly? specially if it makes us smile  
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