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Brian New Member
since 2000-10-21
Posts 3Cortland, NY |
Not exactly good by any means but I'm venting so please have patience ![]() Back on the Upswing One second! One moment ago Life ended, Nothing was left. My heart bereft Of those incorporeal Feelings due to any human. Moments before I bewailed fate, Cursing self in hate; Loathing a living earth, Coveting dead moon. Turns out I judged too soon. I found myself Happy once again. Heck, to be frank Everything is fine. Broadly I'll smile now, Until, of course, Next time... |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Welcome to Passions, Brian. I think this is great! It describes very well the roller coaster ride that life can be at times. Please check your email for a special welcome from Passions! Denise |
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wordancer Senior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 809VA |
He is down...he is up...and down and up...gosh, this captures well, the way it is for most of us. Hope to see more of your words soon. -Lady |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Brian~ Welcome to Passions and to the Pub. You're gonna like it here. ![]() 'Just Writing', huh ? Well, this shows talent ... so keep it up ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
Welcome! Life is pretty up and down for a lot of us. Glad you can see the humor in it. ![]() To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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a_little_girl Member
since 2000-05-08
Posts 307San Alejandro, HI, USA |
Welcome to Passions. Not bad for a first piece...or venting it out. --Little Girl |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
Geez..you're giving me motion sickness...up..down...but great mood swings. Nice entrance. wish you would have stood still. My legs are still wobbly from the ride. Ron |
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bestgirl911 Senior Member
since 2000-10-04
Posts 551Clio, MI , United We Stand |
what a delightful description of lifes ride.....Welcome to Passions! you'll find lots of friends in the pub.... Best |
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blackhalo Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467Denver, CO |
Brian, I think that for "Just Writing" and "venting Fellings," you are an amazingly talented writer. Wonderful first post! Welcome to Passions. I hope you will find great friends here in the Pub! ~Alicia A. Renzelman |
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kid D Member
since 2000-10-18
Posts 64 |
really liked this, its nice to see it gets better ![]() ![]() |
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