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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow 
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I Desire I desire to feel the warm soft sand gush through my toes as I walk barefoot along the shore. I desire the bold scent of ocean air as the cool crisp breeze sweeps my flowing hair across my face. I desire the intense energy of the tide as it forcibly crashes against the jagged rocks with passion I desire the eternity of distance within my eyesight to give me inner peaceful solitude. |
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Wikket Member
since 2000-01-29
Posts 340Santa Clara, CA USA |
Great poem...reminded me of walking through Coronado Beach right in front of of the Hotel Del Coronado when I was a teenager. *sigh* someday I'll see it again... --Jamie  "I know I should have told you But I was so afraid you'd leave And now there's nothing left to say Well nothing that you'd believe I never meant to hurt you With the things I couldn't say I promise you tomorrow While denying you today..." by Stabbing Westward |
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Beverly Member
since 2000-02-19
Posts 123New Mexico |
This poem has awesome imagery, with deep emotion! I love it! Keep posting! |
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Little_Spyro Senior Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 659San Diego, CA, USA |
I agree! This is so beautiful...reminds me of my own poem (White Sands) that I wrote a few days ago. I love beaches too!  This is incredible work, Lost! Keep it up!  Little Spyro T. Dragon Wikket--That wouldn't be the Coronado beach in San Diego County, would it? |
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childomine Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818st. petersburg, FL |
"inner peaceful solitude" - something that we all seek. The beach - a wonderful place to find it! Closing my eyes, your words running through my mind - I could feel the breeze, hear the waves and even taste the salt! |
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Maya the Brokenhearted Member
since 2000-02-13
Posts 66 |
good poem  I love the beach too.Maya Shall we live to breathe again? Or simply just exsist in this limbo we dare to call life! ~Maya 2/20/00 |
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William P Bussey Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 188 |
I find a real lust for life in your words, you have a beautiful soul and it shows through. Bill |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
My sentiments exactly! This is beautiful, Gloria!! Denise |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
A beautiful soul you have indeed....and I know Great poem, as always Gloria ! |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
my sentiments exactly...very well expressed and the last verse is awesome |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
A well expresed poem. Peaceful and inspiring Joyce |
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twinsgd Member
since 2000-02-13
Posts 416Ontario,Canada |
great poem Gloria...sounded wistful and longing to me. Jack |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Well you denfinatly took me there, Lovely imagary. Don't ever give in, if you do you've lost everything you've ever had and everything you hope to gain, but if you carry on your already winning. |
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