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Victoria
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0 posted 2000-10-12 05:44 PM


Do not awaken the shadows tonight
it is the night she stalked the grounds
along the stony path of moonlight
you can still hear her heart pound
do not awaken the shadows tonight
the legend says she will come back
she disappeared fifty years ago..
Shhhhh.. or she will attack

Do not awaken the shadows tonight
please i beg of you
if the moon turns purple in the fog
it will be your only clue
so do not awaken the shadows tonight
or they will whisper her name
her reflection in cyan ripples
will drown you in a river of flames




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- Paul Valery (1871-1945)

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Wobbly Head Bob
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1 posted 2000-10-12 05:54 PM


Ohhh, spooky!!!  Cyan ripples....damn, I wished I'd thought of that one!  Great read, but I'm too scared to go out tonight!  :P
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2 posted 2000-10-12 06:07 PM


ha ha..just stay away from those cyan ripples..thank you whb...appreciate your comments... BOO

                  ~Victoria~


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3 posted 2000-10-12 10:20 PM


Very spooky! I think I'll sleep with the nite-lite on....hehehe  Very good, Victoria!

Denise

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4 posted 2000-10-13 04:58 AM


She sure seems like an interesting lady.....
a bit scary though.



Jon

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5 posted 2000-10-13 10:13 AM


Thank you Denise..my number one fan haa..appreciate your comments this morning..

A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
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6 posted 2000-10-13 10:21 AM


Thank you jon..haa...smiling at those cute little faces haa..you can keep Denise company so she doesnt have to sleep with the light on haa...

A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)

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7 posted 2000-10-13 01:16 PM


Victoria~
So intriguing ...

'if the moon turns purple in the fog
it will be your only clue'


Kind of makes me want to keep an eye on the moon !
~*Marge*~



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Victoria
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8 posted 2000-10-13 06:15 PM


yes Marge..would be a good idea haa..you never know..thanks for reading..

         ~Victoria~


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